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What does burning poetry smell like?

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#1    SpiritWriter

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Posted 08 February 2013 - 02:51 AM

I sat to think
and could not
but in partial bursts
that I could barely
hold on to.

I received an image.
It made its impression
in my mind
and lasted for three seconds.

I wrote it as a poem,
as the inside of paper folded,
before it's turned to chaff.

I wonder by its whiff
if one could understand.

Edited by SpiritWriter, 08 February 2013 - 03:26 AM.

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#2    Jessica Christ

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Posted 08 February 2013 - 04:11 PM

Brevity and depth.

Reading it is a journey where you go though some ground and end up at a place you were not at the beginning.

The first stanza very much comes to you in partial bursts, the second is like an image and can be describe with the word "precision", the third is very sweet poetry, and the final ties it all up in surrealism.






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