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#1    chopmo

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Posted 08 February 2013 - 03:45 AM

I used to write a fair bit of stuff like this, I'm not a fringe flicker :P or anything like that no offence to those who are. One of my biggest influences is as corny as it sounds Scott Levy (Raven) just I always liked his work on the mic as he would always dabble with a Edgar Allen Poe sence about it *insane genious vibe*, which always caught my interest. I have trouble creatively writing now, i have to do it in quick bursts or else i end up proofreading and re-writing it numbers of times and can never pick it up later and continue on.
*sidenote* - Just before the trolls come out, I appreciate the business of pro-wrestling don't really care what happens on tv or social media in regards to what they do, but moreso the abilities and contructive abilities backstage which has faded alot since back in the day... anyways more than happy to share my views on that just start the thread, tag me and fire away.

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we never know how its gonna pan out
whats coming next still filled with doubt
sometimes the regrets in life fill my head
never wish that i would just fall dead
ive come too far and overcome too much
to be negative to give up for the reason of such
3000 kilometres just made it all hazy
blocked the view of what i shouldve seen its crazy

friends and family fill the void inside
full of incoherent self concious pride
to dream is to live
ignorance is to give
so much is inside dwelling
getting to the point that my brain is swelling
scared of knowing the truth
too busy being the proof
to even think of treading backwards now
knee deep but i feel im about to drown

wish i never had to speak of it
that it just already known
circling around this dark pit
hoping someday i will run to the throne
understanding true self is the key in life
phillosophical storytellers live the fight
alone dark and hurting
on the outside its all flirting
projection is showing that its grouse
the bottle helps not to feel as shy as a mouse

in time i hope you'll understand
that its the royal flush in your hand
forever strolling sunset into the decent
not ever worrying about the content
not living the lie
just praying to live the beauty and i

why is everyone so &^%$ing concerned with "the end"...
new beginnings is what you should be concerned about...

#2    SpiritWriter

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Posted 08 February 2013 - 05:01 AM

That about sums it up ... spot on chap.. I like this.

The letter kills but The Spirit gives life. 2 Corinthians 3:6

Non-ambiguity and non-contradiction are one sided and thus unsuited to express the incomprehensible. -Jung

#3    Jessica Christ

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Posted 08 February 2013 - 04:27 PM

I hate the "inside dwelling". It can eat you from the inside out.

Mega points for using "grouse" in a little used context.

See ya later time, time to run for the throne myself.





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