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[third_eye]

your gentle breath caresses the plains,
who shall care if you scream through valleys;
and thunders off the cliffs.
the unending roar, shaking them unto dust.

your gentle gaze silently stills the night,
who shall care if you steals life through dreams;
and drowns a universe of reality.
the unceasing sight, exposing them as dust.

you can disguise yourself but your heart,
can't be hidden, inconcealable.

your gentle tears swells the oceans,
an eternal sea to wash away the blood;
and still the land is red.
the restless rust, reducing all to dust.

you can flee but where you go,
your heart as is your shadow is with you.

your gentle heartbeat tingles to the soul,
who shall care if it is torn apart;
and lightly scattering with the wind.
the realisation, remembering all is dust.

your gentle warmth billows a heavy heart,
who shall care if it is asleep;
and buoyed in a middle of a dreamed galaxy.
the beginning and the end of all as dust.

and from dust and to dust ...




~third_eye @SHaYAP©2013

Edited by Still Waters, 15 February 2013 - 12:43 AM.
fixed typo

[Still Waters]

Very good

[third_eye]

Still Waters, on 14 February 2013 - 04:23 PM, said:

Very good

my eyes are failing me, be a dear and fix typo on "your gentle gaze slently (silently) stills the night," for me?

thanks ye

~I needs new seeing eye glasses but they don't come in threes

[Still Waters]

third_eye, on 15 February 2013 - 12:08 AM, said:

my eyes are failing me, be a dear and fix typo on "your gentle gaze slently (silently) stills the night," for me?

thanks ye

~I needs new seeing eye glasses but they don't come in threes

Fixed.......seeing as you asked me so nicely

[third_eye]

Still Waters, on 15 February 2013 - 12:51 AM, said:

Fixed.......seeing as you asked me so nicely

and I was about to beg ...
wuff woof !

[Knight Of Shadows]

i like your " shadows of poems " very often
great job

[third_eye]

Knight Of Shadows, on 15 February 2013 - 11:32 AM, said:

i like your " shadows of poems " very often
great job

thanks you kindly
have you been to my cavern ?
one stop directory to my other stuff ...

[Knight Of Shadows]

third_eye, on 15 February 2013 - 02:57 PM, said:

thanks you kindly
have you been to my cavern ?
one stop directory to my other stuff ...

i saw this line in horror movie where the victim get killed in those caverns

[third_eye]

Knight Of Shadows, on 15 February 2013 - 05:17 PM, said:

i saw this line in horror movie where the victim get killed in those caverns

really ?
been cleaning up the cavern but have yet to come across any dead bodies
not even a spider ... lotsa empty beer cans ... Oh! bring own beer still applies

Edited by third_eye, 16 February 2013 - 05:41 AM.

[Mistydawn]

Made me want to cry, but it was awesome.