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#1    third_eye

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Posted 14 February 2013 - 06:07 AM

your gentle breath caresses the plains,
who shall care if you scream through valleys;
and thunders off the cliffs.
the unending roar, shaking them unto dust.

your gentle gaze silently stills the night,
who shall care if you steals life through dreams;
and drowns a universe of reality.
the unceasing sight, exposing them as dust.

you can disguise yourself but your heart,
can't be hidden, inconcealable.

your gentle tears swells the oceans,
an eternal sea to wash away the blood;
and still the land is red.
the restless rust, reducing all to dust.

you can flee but where you go,
your heart as is your shadow is with you.

your gentle heartbeat tingles to the soul,
who shall care if it is torn apart;
and lightly scattering with the wind.
the realisation, remembering all is dust.

your gentle warmth billows a heavy heart,
who shall care if it is asleep;
and buoyed in a middle of a dreamed galaxy.
the beginning and the end of all as dust.

and from dust and to dust ...




~third_eye @SHaYAP©2013

Edited by Still Waters, 15 February 2013 - 12:43 AM.
fixed typo

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' ... life and death carry on as they always have ~ and always will, only the dreamer is gone ~ behind the flow of imagination, beyond any effort to be still
dancing in the ebb and flow of attention, more present than the breath, I find the origins of my illusions, only the dreamer is gone ~ the dream never ends
'

GIFTS WITH NO GIVER - a love affair with truth ~ Poems by Nirmala

third_eye ' s cavern ~ bring own beer


#2    Still Waters

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Posted 14 February 2013 - 04:23 PM

Very good :tu:

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Posted 15 February 2013 - 12:08 AM

View PostStill Waters, on 14 February 2013 - 04:23 PM, said:

Very good :tu:

my eyes are failing me, be a dear and fix typo on "your gentle gaze slently (silently) stills the night," for me?

thanks ye

~I needs new seeing eye glasses but they don't come in threes

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' ... life and death carry on as they always have ~ and always will, only the dreamer is gone ~ behind the flow of imagination, beyond any effort to be still
dancing in the ebb and flow of attention, more present than the breath, I find the origins of my illusions, only the dreamer is gone ~ the dream never ends
'

GIFTS WITH NO GIVER - a love affair with truth ~ Poems by Nirmala

third_eye ' s cavern ~ bring own beer


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Posted 15 February 2013 - 12:51 AM

View Postthird_eye, on 15 February 2013 - 12:08 AM, said:

my eyes are failing me, be a dear and fix typo on "your gentle gaze slently (silently) stills the night," for me?

thanks ye

~I needs new seeing eye glasses but they don't come in threes
Fixed.......seeing as you asked me so nicely :lol:

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Posted 15 February 2013 - 12:57 AM

View PostStill Waters, on 15 February 2013 - 12:51 AM, said:

Fixed.......seeing as you asked me so nicely :lol:

and I was about to beg ...
wuff woof !

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' ... life and death carry on as they always have ~ and always will, only the dreamer is gone ~ behind the flow of imagination, beyond any effort to be still
dancing in the ebb and flow of attention, more present than the breath, I find the origins of my illusions, only the dreamer is gone ~ the dream never ends
'

GIFTS WITH NO GIVER - a love affair with truth ~ Poems by Nirmala

third_eye ' s cavern ~ bring own beer


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Posted 15 February 2013 - 11:32 AM

i like your " shadows of poems " very often
great job

by the name of Allah the Gracious the Merciful
Say, "I seek refuge in the Lord of daybreak From the evil of that which He created
And from the evil of darkness when it settles And from the evil of the blowers in knots
And from the evil of an envier when he envies"
truthful was Allah The Most High And Great


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Posted 15 February 2013 - 02:57 PM

View PostKnight Of Shadows, on 15 February 2013 - 11:32 AM, said:

i like your " shadows of poems " very often
great job

thanks you kindly
have you been to my cavern ?
one stop directory to my other stuff ...

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' ... life and death carry on as they always have ~ and always will, only the dreamer is gone ~ behind the flow of imagination, beyond any effort to be still
dancing in the ebb and flow of attention, more present than the breath, I find the origins of my illusions, only the dreamer is gone ~ the dream never ends
'

GIFTS WITH NO GIVER - a love affair with truth ~ Poems by Nirmala

third_eye ' s cavern ~ bring own beer


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Posted 15 February 2013 - 05:17 PM

View Postthird_eye, on 15 February 2013 - 02:57 PM, said:

thanks you kindly
have you been to my cavern ?
one stop directory to my other stuff ...
i saw this line in horror movie where the victim get killed in those caverns :P

by the name of Allah the Gracious the Merciful
Say, "I seek refuge in the Lord of daybreak From the evil of that which He created
And from the evil of darkness when it settles And from the evil of the blowers in knots
And from the evil of an envier when he envies"
truthful was Allah The Most High And Great


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Posted 16 February 2013 - 05:41 AM

View PostKnight Of Shadows, on 15 February 2013 - 05:17 PM, said:

i saw this line in horror movie where the victim get killed in those caverns :P

really ?
been cleaning up the cavern but have yet to come across any dead bodies :D
not even a spider ... lotsa empty beer cans ... Oh! bring own beer still applies :lol:

Edited by third_eye, 16 February 2013 - 05:41 AM.

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' ... life and death carry on as they always have ~ and always will, only the dreamer is gone ~ behind the flow of imagination, beyond any effort to be still
dancing in the ebb and flow of attention, more present than the breath, I find the origins of my illusions, only the dreamer is gone ~ the dream never ends
'

GIFTS WITH NO GIVER - a love affair with truth ~ Poems by Nirmala

third_eye ' s cavern ~ bring own beer


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Posted 16 February 2013 - 05:53 PM

Made me want to cry, but it was awesome. :cry:

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