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Your Heart Has the Monopoly


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#1    SpiritWriter

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Posted 07 April 2013 - 04:11 AM

Is every moment a time for glory
or does one stumble across it
the way an astronaut may?

We know it's there but we cannot see it,
there in the dark,
in a massive swarming nothing,
in a place we dare not enter
even in uttmost surrender.

Across the planets,
in a criss cross of animalistic light,
lions and bears and arrows pointing
come to life,

roaring:
"I told you so."
and
"Don't be so dismissive."

If only
you could catch a comet ride
you could find
what no one else is seeking.

Oh to be alone
with the greatest gift preserved.

A time stamp with your number.

Who in the moon is making the howl?
Who marks the noon, the sun or the dial?
Who on the earth is wearing your smile?

The letter kills but The Spirit gives life. 2 Corinthians 3:6

Non-ambiguity and non-contradiction are one sided and thus unsuited to express the incomprehensible. -Jung

#2    theSOURCE

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Posted 07 April 2013 - 04:30 AM

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Who in the moon is making the howl?
Who marks the noon, the sun or the dial?
Who on the earth is wearing your smile?

Who indeed?

Very nice as usual, sweetness. I always look forward to listening to your poems and you never disappoint. :)


#3    Avatar Samantha Ai

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Posted 18 April 2013 - 06:30 AM

Simply and extraordinaly beautiful at the same time.

I really enjoy how you synthesize in so many of your pieces what to others are opposites: earth/space, our own limitations (limiting thoughts)/the cosmos, constellations/riding a comet, and fear to move forward/exploration.

You even offer a glimpse of what is made when two different elements are joined (sun dial = sun and dial; funny how the product takes the same name as the independent elements).

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Non-ambiguity and non-contradiction are one sided and thus unsuited to express the incomprehensible. -Jung






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