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#1    SpiritWriter

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Posted 17 April 2013 - 08:24 PM

One day
I imagine she will greet me
or that there is truly
such a comfort.

Without it I couldn't stand
to turn to the beginning
of the road that lies
beyond the blackness.

She was my only love.

Each moment
is like the time
I knew her, somewhere
but now, every world
has toppled my heart
and every man's despair
is my despair.

The letter kills but The Spirit gives life. 2 Corinthians 3:6

Non-ambiguity and non-contradiction are one sided and thus unsuited to express the incomprehensible. -Jung

#2    OverSword

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Posted 17 April 2013 - 08:56 PM

SW I had a coworker who writes alot of poetry read your rambling blog and he was pretty impressed.


#3    SpiritWriter

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Posted 17 April 2013 - 09:22 PM

Oh wow tell them i said thankyou pls..

:)

View PostOverSword, on 17 April 2013 - 08:56 PM, said:

SW I had a coworker who writes alot of poetry read your rambling blog and he was pretty impressed.

Him*

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Non-ambiguity and non-contradiction are one sided and thus unsuited to express the incomprehensible. -Jung

#4    Jessica Christ

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Posted 18 April 2013 - 05:59 AM

Poems written by old souls, the balance of longing/pain and empathy, the many worlds that we exists in, this poem has a lot going on.

You know I really like it.


#5    SpiritWriter

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Posted 18 April 2013 - 01:45 PM

View PostLeave Britney alone!, on 18 April 2013 - 05:59 AM, said:

Poems written by old souls, the balance of longing/pain and empathy, the many worlds that we exists in, this poem has a lot going on.

You know I really like it.

You are perceptive Britney...

The letter kills but The Spirit gives life. 2 Corinthians 3:6

Non-ambiguity and non-contradiction are one sided and thus unsuited to express the incomprehensible. -Jung

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Posted 18 April 2013 - 02:52 PM

I detect a stream of violet sparkles in the night ....

~ a nice weave ... SpiritWriter

< i bow >

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#7    Cloudshill

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Posted 18 April 2013 - 03:17 PM

Time stands still as the world flashes by.........

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#8    SpiritWriter

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Posted 18 April 2013 - 03:23 PM

View Postthird_eye, on 18 April 2013 - 02:52 PM, said:

I detect a stream of violet sparkles in the night ....

~ a nice weave ... SpiritWriter

< i bow >

Thank you for your bit of imagry... :)

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Posted 18 April 2013 - 04:09 PM

You speak my pain, my love, my heart, are you in my mind...?

I hate you, I love you, I love you, I hate you, you need to draw my line...

They say the longest, loneliest journey a person can take is from the mind to the heart. The journey back is where the beauty is found.

thanks for sharing, X

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Posted 24 April 2013 - 02:26 PM

Nice one.

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