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#1    Cloudshill

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Posted 03 May 2013 - 04:02 PM

A rose has bloomed for you today
And yellow is it's colour
As splendid as the thought of you
A rose upon an alter

For me to be.....across the sea
To see you all again
Is for me....a dream to be
To see my lovely friends

Just like this rose...my memories glow
Like sunshine from above
Filled with scenes....of things I've seen
In a land that I did love

And in that land....where I did stand
A family of four friends
Just you three,,,,,were there with me
And grace was in the wind

So now I learn....I must return
To be with you again
And to be....with family
To those who took me in

So now I wake....make no mistake
The flower  surely grows
And now I bend....to see my friend
And gently stroke the rose

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Posted 03 May 2013 - 04:05 PM

I do love roses.


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Posted 03 May 2013 - 04:15 PM

~ the rose arose ... and I am bent no more .... ~

pureness flowing in the veins ol'chap ...

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Posted 03 May 2013 - 06:10 PM

If you recite some of your verse Cloudsy, you wont need roses. Lovely.

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Posted 03 May 2013 - 06:51 PM

I had to listen to this one several times. It's very touching.

Kudos Cloudshill.


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Posted 03 May 2013 - 07:03 PM

Touching.. it is certainly graceful like a rose. Well written. :yes:


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Posted 04 May 2013 - 05:08 PM

Thank you Hilander....I do too
I bow to you as well Third Eye.
"And to Miss T......this rose is free"...ty....
theSOURSE.....your words are very kind....thank you so much..
and AliveInDeath....indeed, they are beautiful and graceful, just like my friends......thank you very much....

Roses for everybody........ :)

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Posted 05 May 2013 - 12:39 PM

Your poem is lovely. :)  I've read it several times over and each time I think to myself, I wish I could write poems like you do, you have such a gift of expressing yourself, it's so beautiful.

I like roses, your rose garden is very pretty. My dad loved roses too and used to grow them with lots of tlc, my mum still has a few left in the garden but they're not nearly as good as when my dad was alive.

View PostCloudshill, on 04 May 2013 - 05:08 PM, said:

Roses for everybody........ :)
Thank you very much.....and for the memories too :wub:

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Posted 07 May 2013 - 10:44 PM

Thank you very much Still Waters..............you are a rose...... :yes:

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Posted 10 May 2013 - 10:13 AM

can almost smell roses from my screen :D
great poem man

by the name of Allah the Gracious the Merciful
Say, "I seek refuge in the Lord of daybreak From the evil of that which He created
And from the evil of darkness when it settles And from the evil of the blowers in knots
And from the evil of an envier when he envies"
truthful was Allah The Most High And Great


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Posted 10 May 2013 - 10:26 AM

loved the flow of verse

`And be true to every promise - for, verily you will be called to account for every promise which you have made.
al-isra 17:34

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Posted 11 May 2013 - 01:53 PM

Thanks Knight of Shadows (lol)........it smells.......yellow....... :D
Thank you for your kind words Armchair Educated.......I like your dog too....... :)

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