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A Poet's Quest


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#1    Knight Of Shadows

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Posted 08 May 2013 - 02:58 PM

they've been peaceful farmers in the brief past
before the shadows of death on their lands has been cast

they set out to reclaim their rights to face the Lord
to wash the filth from the face of their world

thousands of warriors has left their homes
on top of the mountain they gathered like storms
in known places unknown faces the heartbeat nervously races
but they are not the enemy they shout out unity
brave warriors united to fulfill their destiny

descended from hell the fiends of night
in the distant miles the castle was guarded by the Dragon
it's getting hard to determine what's right
the arrows and spears showered the Dragon like furious falcons

to a million piece they tore down the earth
and with it the oppression that haunted them from birth

they laid a siege on the Serpent's fortress walls
the Dragon is breathing fiery anger as he falls

in rage through the shadows screams the bear
intimidating the warriors who show no fear
holding their arms to wreck , cut and forever tear
his thick skin of which they shall wear

raising up his carcass on display
his corruption is no longer welcome to stay
he'll never stop the flame


the Poet faced the enemies where others lay dead
hearing voices screaming loud inside his head

the swords swarming to devour him into the depth
the heavy steel penetrated by the arrows of death

under the cover of night the Serpent could be seen in sight
the Poet swinging the sword without a second to rest
the vision became so blurry and started to faint

he has no power left deep inside but the Serpent had no where left to hide
he no longer can stay awake he finally hit the watery surface of the murky lake
unto the eerie depths dragging along the head of the snake

by the name of Allah the Gracious the Merciful
Say, "I seek refuge in the Lord of daybreak From the evil of that which He created
And from the evil of darkness when it settles And from the evil of the blowers in knots
And from the evil of an envier when he envies"
truthful was Allah The Most High And Great


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Posted 08 May 2013 - 06:13 PM

keep it coming......... :tu:

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Posted 09 May 2013 - 12:08 AM

do a reshuffle, Part III then Part I and end with Part II ....
I can't help but see that you compromised this part to an early end ... too hurried

can't say I like this as an end part ... good effort :tu:

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Posted 09 May 2013 - 12:45 AM

View Postthird_eye, on 09 May 2013 - 12:08 AM, said:

do a reshuffle, Part III then Part I and end with Part II ....
I can't help but see that you compromised this part to an early end ... too hurried

can't say I like this as an end part ... good effort :tu:
it's not the end :P
there is at least one . or two parts one done and one am working on

Edited by Knight Of Shadows, 09 May 2013 - 12:45 AM.

by the name of Allah the Gracious the Merciful
Say, "I seek refuge in the Lord of daybreak From the evil of that which He created
And from the evil of darkness when it settles And from the evil of the blowers in knots
And from the evil of an envier when he envies"
truthful was Allah The Most High And Great





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