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Vile Crone

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#1    Lava_Lady

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Posted 22 July 2013 - 11:52 PM

My first time sharing....


Vile Crone

Your stench preceded you
I ignored the warning
And your stink assaulted my being
Yet again.

Nothing compared to the
steady plunging thwick
and subsequent sucking shwick
of the knife forcibly entering then pulled from my flesh.

Blood
Serum
Slowly
Dripping down.
You taste the blade
Each time.

Vile, hateful crone
The low, hiss of your spiteful and vicious
words whispered into my ears
And the look of loathsome disgust
Cast upon me
belie the perverse, orgasmic joy
You feel at the release of your ire.

On me.  
Spent.

Crimes were perpetrated against you
And I will pay.

"The test of a first-rate intelligence is the ability to hold two opposed ideas in the mind at the same time, and still retain the ability to function."  - F. Scott Fitzgerald


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Posted 23 July 2013 - 11:56 PM

Wow! I like this one. :yes:

That was an emotionally charged poem. I hope it was in some way cathartic for you. :unsure2:


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Posted 24 July 2013 - 12:00 AM

View PosttheSOURCE, on 23 July 2013 - 11:56 PM, said:

Wow! I like this one. :yes:

That was an emotionally charged poem. I hope it was in some way cathartic for you. :unsure2:

It was... :)

Thank you!  (XOXO)  :cat: :yes:

"The test of a first-rate intelligence is the ability to hold two opposed ideas in the mind at the same time, and still retain the ability to function."  - F. Scott Fitzgerald


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Posted 24 July 2013 - 12:27 AM

View PostLava_Lady, on 24 July 2013 - 12:00 AM, said:

It was... :)

Thank you!  (XOXO)  :cat: :yes:

Aw, shucks, ma'am. :blush:

Twern't nuttin. ;)


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Posted 24 July 2013 - 12:04 PM

I'm speechless. Bravo!


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Posted 25 July 2013 - 05:10 AM

View Postshephardess, on 24 July 2013 - 12:04 PM, said:

I'm speechless. Bravo!

Thanks Shephardess!
I think you can relate...

"The test of a first-rate intelligence is the ability to hold two opposed ideas in the mind at the same time, and still retain the ability to function."  - F. Scott Fitzgerald






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