Mentalcase Posted October 22, 2004 #1 Share Posted October 22, 2004 Fire Flame I just don't know why, you can't rely on my whole entire way.. You would always be true, if only you knew, that you are my fire flame.. I do not admire, the sound of a lier, I will retire today.. No, I must not be cold, it's just not my road, I do admire taste.. Sign's out all of the time, it flickers and shines, then I must find a way.. I put my life on a wire, this time will expire, then requires a person's haste.. Destroyers will have some employers that are so darn annoying and retort into selfish games.. I just don't know why, I can't reply, when everyone's gone away... I will always be true, especially to you, for you are my fire flame...... William Charles Masterson Jr. A freestyle poem I sang while walking home tonight after spending some time with my fiance. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheOracle Posted October 22, 2004 #2 Share Posted October 22, 2004 Fire Flame I put my life on a wire, this time will expire, then requires a person's haste.. 319351[/snapback] Love that line man Awesome MC, Great poem Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mentalcase Posted October 22, 2004 Author #3 Share Posted October 22, 2004 Ahh, thanks TO!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fluffybunny Posted October 22, 2004 #4 Share Posted October 22, 2004 Sweet... Maybe it is just me, but I could absolutly hear some old scratchy voiced jazz singer plinking away at his guitar in a smokey bar and singing that in a deep scratchy voice... I guess I'm wierd... Very good job Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mentalcase Posted October 22, 2004 Author #5 Share Posted October 22, 2004 That's the idea basically, I was messing with different tones, low and high. Thanks for the compliment Fluffy! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Daughter of the Nine Moons Posted October 27, 2004 #6 Share Posted October 27, 2004 Fire Flame Sign's out all of the time, it flickers and shines, then I must find a way... Fire Flame I will always be true, especially to you, for you are my fire flame...... Very cool MC! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dancing_Dumplings Posted October 27, 2004 #7 Share Posted October 27, 2004 tis beautiful MC very nice Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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