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#1    moe eubleck

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Posted 23 October 2004 - 01:28 AM

Avast and be warned. The great and powerful Kismit has requested a creative outlet for the Moe. But Moe is not allowed to jest on this outlet. This will be a challenge. But it can be done . For Moe is mighty and wholesome. But he must sit on the sidelines for this one and let Kevin take the wheels. In exchange, Kismit shall teach Moe much jazzy trivia, so that he will grow wise.






all poetry written by Moe Eubleck on this forum : © 2004 Kevin Baker

Edited by moe eubleck, 29 October 2004 - 03:36 PM.

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Posted 23 October 2004 - 01:30 AM

"ammit"

the shady window frame hides our intentions
but from within we are watching her,
tending her plowed earth with a  three pronged dagger
self proclaimed druidess
goddess of the till
Pomona , Lady orchard.
divinely hands upon her lovely hips.
tossing hair on golden sunlight
such cruelty painted on her face
but realization strikes down divination
for when the rains fall and the make up runs,
her sports utility vehicle speeds away.


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Posted 23 October 2004 - 03:09 AM

We think these are pretty swell, Moe.  I'll critique when you've posted more.

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Posted 23 October 2004 - 04:04 PM

Moe is is indeed mighty and wholesome, but Kevin is pretty groovy.  grin2.gif

"You cannot pass," he said. … "I am a servant of the Secret Fire, wielder of the flame of Anor. You cannot pass. The dark fire will not avail you, flame of Udûn. Go back to the Shadow! You cannot pass."

#5    moe eubleck

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Posted 23 October 2004 - 04:15 PM

here is a copy of the poem I posted ages ago. This is what  first betrayed my inner seriousness to Kismit. I did not like this one. it tells of desperation.

"venus "

She spreads like dark wine though my viens
she is organized despair,
swallowing my doubts in a drop of blood
but lets get aquainted first my love
breath me your name
I want to taste it when you speak.
In the silence before our little death
will you pin me on the cold tiles?
lift my head by the roots ,
your name is warmth in my ear.
breathe it once again.
now dig your talons into me,
so we may die together through clenched teeth.
it has been so long, my love.


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Posted 24 October 2004 - 06:03 AM

Moe has much skill when writing verse

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Posted 25 October 2004 - 04:28 AM

Thank-you Moe ,

I shall attempt to keep up my side of the bargain , I have quite a resource though ..

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Payment for moetry  poetry .....(part 1)

Great Britain's King John (11199_1216) had a servant whose official job it was to hold the King's head if he became sea sick .....

Edit : It's good , I still like the other one more though  wink2.gif ... more please .

Edited by Kismit, 25 October 2004 - 05:08 AM.


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Posted 25 October 2004 - 06:56 AM

" minerva "

laundry day.
a fallen secret from side hollow found
shall we interrogate such illumination ?
unresistable propaganda
tiptoe-stairway
creaky-hindged-entry
upon cold morning bedsheets do we confront our mistress
Cardea, Lady Protectress
devourer of souls
swallower of pink  innocence lost

in the silence before the song began,
the air was golden, shimmering.

but the song was deception
golden, shimmering
my minerva


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Posted 25 October 2004 - 11:06 PM

very sad Moe .
It is interesting to note that Minerva was also the first name of Proffesor Mcgonogal a much loved character of the Harry potter series .

Edited by Kismit, 28 October 2004 - 07:53 AM.


#10    moe eubleck

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Posted 27 October 2004 - 04:35 PM


dont sleep with my fishes
this is my lee shore
its been dangerous too long
rudderless heart of mine

Edited by moe eubleck, 16 August 2005 - 07:14 AM.

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Posted 27 October 2004 - 06:05 PM

Wow moe, I never thought that you could write as serious and thoughtful as sum of these. Exspeccially Venus. Nice.

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Posted 27 October 2004 - 07:03 PM

Very sad Moe

"You cannot pass," he said. … "I am a servant of the Secret Fire, wielder of the flame of Anor. You cannot pass. The dark fire will not avail you, flame of Udûn. Go back to the Shadow! You cannot pass."

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Posted 28 October 2004 - 05:15 AM

Moe's poetry is better than mine.  Much jealousy do I feel this night.

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Posted 28 October 2004 - 08:04 AM

I am trivia-less.

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Posted 28 October 2004 - 08:48 AM

great poems, Moe.

Edited by girty1600, 11 November 2004 - 03:46 AM.





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