StarMountainKid Posted October 10, 2013 #1 Share Posted October 10, 2013 I loved what you possessed but never knew Not only the mystery of your eyes Awoke in me the heat of my body Or your fair lips inviting the warmth of my own But what was hidden from me What was spoken of in the softness of your speech What I saw in the grace of your movement The gentle touch I might have known 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cloudshill Posted October 11, 2013 #2 Share Posted October 11, 2013 Very good, almost like reverie Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
StarMountainKid Posted October 11, 2013 Author #3 Share Posted October 11, 2013 Thanks, Cloudshill. I wrote that about forty years ago when I was a romantic youth. I wasn't then, nor am I now much of a poet. It's a reverie alright about a specific person I should have taken seriously way back then. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Drayno Posted October 12, 2013 #4 Share Posted October 12, 2013 To me this tells me not to waste your chances. To take a risk with reckless, youthful love. Thanks for sharing, Star. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Still Waters Posted October 12, 2013 #5 Share Posted October 12, 2013 Tender loving thoughts of what might have been - nice one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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