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I Loved What You Possessed But Never Knew


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#1    StarMountainKid

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Posted 10 October 2013 - 05:54 AM

I loved what you possessed but never knew
Not only the mystery of your eyes
Awoke in me the heat of my body
Or your fair lips inviting the warmth of my own
But what was hidden from me
What was spoken of in the softness of your speech
What I saw in the grace of your movement
The gentle touch I might have known

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#2    Cloudshill

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Posted 11 October 2013 - 11:46 AM

Very good, almost like reverie

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#3    StarMountainKid

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Posted 11 October 2013 - 11:58 PM

Thanks, Cloudshill. I wrote that about forty years ago when I was a romantic youth. I wasn't then, nor am I now much of a poet. It's a reverie alright about a specific person I should have taken seriously way back then.

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#4    Drayno

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Posted 12 October 2013 - 05:45 AM

To me this tells me not to waste your chances.

To take a risk with reckless, youthful love.

Thanks for sharing, Star.

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Posted 12 October 2013 - 10:57 AM

Tender loving thoughts of what might have been - nice one.

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