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{un}holy haiku a Dot challenge Rate Topic: ***** 22 Votes

#18121 User is offline   clubfoot O.M.G. 


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Posted 06 November 2009 - 12:17 AM

jealousy enthralls
this trap, is the Devil's 'call',
beware, His long 'fall'




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Posted 06 November 2009 - 02:39 AM

beware, His long 'fall'
tumbling like a tumbleweed
can travel quite fast

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Posted 06 November 2009 - 12:52 PM

can travel quite fast
when running like a cheetah
but it's exhausting
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Posted 06 November 2009 - 01:54 PM

but it's exhausting
walking down the road of life
best to take a break

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Posted 06 November 2009 - 02:13 PM

best to take a break
but dont sit still for too long
rusting at idle
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Posted 06 November 2009 - 05:03 PM

rusting at idle
slowly disintegrating
till there's nothing left
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Posted 06 November 2009 - 07:05 PM

till there's nothing left
is entropy's final call
live life, Death is deft






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Posted 06 November 2009 - 09:32 PM

live life, Death is deft
only true end to the pain
only mercy left

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Posted 06 November 2009 - 11:28 PM

only mercy left
if one's heart is truly cleft
one feels, so bereft




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Posted 07 November 2009 - 05:05 PM

one feels, so bereft
but hey, watcha gonna do
it's the way of life
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Posted 07 November 2009 - 05:26 PM

It's the way of life
To live, die, and live again
An eternal dream
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Posted 07 November 2009 - 06:42 PM

An eternal dream
life is cyclic it would seem
a 'path' to redeem


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Posted 07 November 2009 - 07:45 PM

a ‘path’ to redeem
and chances to repeat some
entertaining stuff

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Posted 07 November 2009 - 08:16 PM

entertaining stuff
there can never be enough
humourous rebuff

(ps I'm going to ask my mum about this half-brother of mine and ask her what she was up to in her younger days!......tsk, tsk! Posted Image )

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Posted 07 November 2009 - 08:48 PM

humourous rebuff
shut up, brain, at least for while
let me be myself

(ah, that’s nothing, I’ve got at least three and that’s just the beginning of the story :w00t: )
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