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#20881    joc

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Posted 18 April 2012 - 09:28 PM

not collecting them
anymore even though I
am missing a few
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once i believed that starlight could guide me home
now i know that light is old and stars are cold

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Posted 19 April 2012 - 02:36 PM

am missing a few
girlfriends that I used to have
loved lost loved lost loved

#20883    J. K.

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Posted 19 April 2012 - 04:51 PM

loved lost loved lost loved
loved lost, lost love I recall
Aching soul and heart
One's reality is another's nightmare.

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Posted 19 April 2012 - 07:27 PM

Aching soul and heart
let them rest under hazel
wake up back at home
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Posted 20 April 2012 - 08:46 AM

wake up back at home
only to return once more
to the land of dreams

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Posted 20 April 2012 - 02:24 PM

to the land of dreams
venture forth without cracked shell
naked to the world

#20887    Helen of Annoy

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Posted 20 April 2012 - 06:01 PM

naked to the world
unstoppable once human storm
on the horizon

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Posted 20 April 2012 - 07:31 PM

on the horizon
too distant to be discerned
truth of existence

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Posted 21 April 2012 - 04:39 AM

truth of existence
is there really such a thing?
and what is that truth?
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now i know that light is old and stars are cold

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Posted 21 April 2012 - 08:15 AM

and what is that truth?
dark dream moods but colourful
reality unable to deny
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#20891    joc

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Posted 21 April 2012 - 10:40 AM

Can't deny what's real
a perspective each our own
reality is








rephrased first sentence to fit 5/7/5 mode ;)
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#20892    Helen of Annoy

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Posted 21 April 2012 - 04:20 PM

reality is
I’ll have to leave you, guys, but
you know I love you
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Posted 22 April 2012 - 12:54 AM

you know I love you
sadness permeates the air
missed is what you are
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Posted 23 April 2012 - 02:57 PM

missed is what you are
like Jak and ten sylables
it's quite impressive

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Posted 23 April 2012 - 03:43 PM

it's quite impressive
aroma of new-mown grass
nature's essence known
One's reality is another's nightmare.