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#1    Bone_Collector

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Posted 20 September 2005 - 06:40 AM

I couldn't find it on the net or anywhere else, so I'll put it my own words...

One dark night a young guy in his early twenties was driving along the looney roads of his city's outskirts in his brand new car; he was enjoying every moment of his long private drive.  All of a sudden, he spots a hiker holding a small brief case, standing in front of a grave yard asking for a lift. The hiker was a tall dark guy in a dandy black suit with a matching tie; he was lean but had a very muscular frame and appeared to be in his late forties. The young guy slows down and asks him to get in; the hiker promptly thanks him and gets into the car.
Curiosity gets the better of the young guy and a conversation between the two starts...

Young Guy : what are you doing at this part of the night dressed like this in front
                   of a graveyard?  
Hiker         : I usually spend my day time in the graveyard and return to the city  
                   late at night.
Young guy : *laughs hard* You gotta be kidding man! Why do you do that?
Hiker         : *smiles*

The young guy plays an old Elvis tune on his deck and the conversation between them continues...

Hiker        : wonderful, isn't it?
Young guy: yeah
Hiker        : I and my wife used to dance to this tune.
Young Guy: used to? Don't you dance any more?
Hiker        : No
Young guy : why?
Hiker        : death
Young guy : I'm sorry, I didn't know.
Hiker         : that's alright.
Young guy : how long has it been?
Hiker         : couple of weeks.
Young guy : It must've been tough
Hiker        : it is
Young guy : how did she die?
Hiker         : who?
Young guy  : your wife
Hiker         : why are you killing her? She's hale and healthy, fit and absolutely  
                   fine!
Young guy :  but, but ... you just said...
Hiker         : I wasn't speaking of her death; I was speaking of mine.
Young guy  : *laughs hysterically* now, you HAVE a sense of humor, don't you?
Hiker         :*smiles*
Young guy : so mister ghost, what do you guys do on weekends, do you go to  
                 movies, do drugs, girls and stuff? * pokes the hiker with his elbow*
Hiker         : not exactly, we just hang around here and there.
Young guy: aww, come on! Cut the crap man, your little joke is really getting
                 stale. Hey btw, can you disappear?*laughs*
Hiker         : people think ghosts are creepy monsters which can take any shape
                  and form and haunt deserted places and a whole lot of  
                  mumbo jumbo but in reality ghosts are just like you, they                
                  don't disappear or anything, after death, they are just transported
                  into another dimension; the workings of which the living don't quite
                  percieve.    
Young guy : oh yeah?
Hiker         :*cough cough* excuse me *pulls out a hanky from his pocket*
Young guy : what the hell is that stain on your hanky?
Hiker         : It's a blood stain.
Young Guy : WHAT?
Hiker         : I was shot.
Young Guy : enough is enough! *pulls his car over and opens the door* GET OUT
                  OF MY CAR RIGHT NOW! *pulls the hiker forcibly out *
Hiker         : okay, okay....relax! We are doing this for a prank TV show; the stain
                   is just ink...see...there is a camera in my briefcase, the whole thing
                   was staged and recorded.
Young guy : *laughs out loudly* you know, not one moment did I believe that this
                   thing was really true.
Hiker         :  Man! We tried this trick on several people, everybody was scared
                   sh**; I had to call it off before I could get to the hanky part but you
                   were the  FIRST guy who wasn't scared.
Young guy :  it's a good idea! It must be fun doing stuff like this.
Hiker         : you bet!
Young guy  : Just one thing: you were wrong!
Hiker         : about what?
Young guy :  ghosts
Hiker         : what about them?
Young guy : ghosts DO disappear! *smiles and vanishes into thin air*

The hiker died instantaneously of a heart attack....

Edited by Bone_Collector, 20 September 2005 - 09:05 AM.

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Posted 20 September 2005 - 06:45 AM

cute one, but I shouldn't read spooky stories at this time of night...

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Posted 20 September 2005 - 11:03 AM

great story...with really unexpected end..... rolleyes.gif

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Posted 20 September 2005 - 11:11 AM

Hey, thanks! I took quite some time to decide how to put it. I wanted the end to be totally unexpected.

The woods are lovely, dark and deep, but I have promises to keep and miles to go before I sleep... and miles to go before I sleep ~Robert Frost

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Posted 20 September 2005 - 05:02 PM

Good ending. tongue.gif I wasn't expecting that.

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Posted 20 September 2005 - 07:16 PM

Good ending!  Kinda reminds me of something Stephen King might pull!   tongue.gif

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Posted 20 September 2005 - 07:28 PM

good story you should write up another thumbsup.gif


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Posted 20 September 2005 - 07:35 PM

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Posted 21 September 2005 - 04:14 AM

Thanks Guys, I WILL write when I get some free time.

The woods are lovely, dark and deep, but I have promises to keep and miles to go before I sleep... and miles to go before I sleep ~Robert Frost

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Posted 21 September 2005 - 04:34 PM

Real good story!! You show some talent!!  Keep it up!!

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Posted 21 September 2005 - 05:45 PM

Horrible. The dialogue is dreadful and doesn't resemble the conversational flow that any two people in the place known as "the real world" would ever carry with each other. The ending is a third grader's attempt at a Sixth Sense ending. Please don't ever post again, anywhere on the internet.


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Posted 21 September 2005 - 05:47 PM

Well My name is Zeeshan and By Reading that Urban Legend I Remember a Movie... I live in Pakistan...I Saw an Indian Film named as "Darna Mana Hai" crying.gif (Fear is not allowed)...In That There were 5 Friend Who lost their way in a Forest and it was night to Pass Their Time They sat beside an old Cabin in Forest and Started Telling Scary Stories in one of the Stories The Same Urban Legend was Mentioned..............If u wanna know the End of the Movie Just Ask me!!!!!!!!!!





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Posted 21 September 2005 - 05:49 PM

Well My name is Zeeshan and By Reading that Urban Legend I Remember a Movie... I live in Pakistan...I Saw an Indian Film named as "Darna Mana Hai" crying.gif (Fear is not allowed)...In That There were 5 Friend Who lost their way in a Forest and it was night to Pass Their Time They sat beside an old Cabin in Forest and Started Telling Scary Stories in one of the Stories The Same Urban Legend was Mentioned..............If u wanna know the End of the Movie Just Ask me!!!!!!!!!!




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Posted 21 September 2005 - 09:18 PM

Good Story, i didnt expect that !  grin2.gif

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Posted 22 September 2005 - 02:52 AM

Awsome story thumbsup.gif
loved the twist at the end

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