Horrible. The dialogue is dreadful and doesn't resemble the conversational flow that any two people in the place known as "the real world" would ever carry with each other. The ending is a third grader's attempt at a Sixth Sense ending.
Thank you very much!
First of all, let me remind you that this is the URBAN LEGEND forum. The stories that we read here are a type of folklore, in the form of supposedly-true stories circulated primarily by word of mouth. I never claimed that I created this story; I heard it and tried to put it in my own words as I mentioned at he very beginning of my first post. I'm glad some people liked it.
Please don't ever post again, anywhere on the internet.
Ooooh....I'm scaaaared...what do I do now, I'm threatened by the Internet overlord. My posting days are over.
Edited by Bone_Collector, 22 September 2005 - 06:12 AM.