ok this thread is a trademark of ghost mysteries and the form mod. gave me permition to post.

ok now for some good old fasion fun, the thing we are going to do is making a story between us. Basically I will start it, and write a couple of lines, then some one continues it however they want by adding a couple of lines and so on. and after the threads dead and or finished i'll post it on a page and see how it turned out. and no bad stuff in it.
ok ready? ill give it a go.

it was a dark and stormy night . the power has been out for sometime and sunburst was getting impatiant. "when is it going to turn back on?"asked sunburst. "i have no clue."replied dp. pale had gone out for some wood for the fire. the door opend, and.........

there was godzilla outside the door!!

and I owed him ALOT of money, wich I didn't have.

just then pale got back and saw that godzilla was there and riped one of his eyeballs out and he ran away.
"thanks pale"says sunburst "ya thanks" adds dp "what took ya so long" asked finsup22.

- I saw my wolf mates said pale.

- And? How are they?, asked dp

- Pale as the snow, said pale, we later went and took in a bath in the river, said pale looking at the floor.

- Nice.... a bath in the river under a storm at night , said sunburst.

- Well it was fun , said pale.

The storm wasn't showing any signs of stopping. sunburst just looked out the window, but saw something particular, sunburst stared at it wondering what it was.

-sunburst want some coffee?, asked dp

- WTH?!?!?!, screamed sunburst.

- What?!?!?! AHHHHH!!!, screamed pale.

- Why the hell are you both screaming?!?!, asked dp.

- I don't know ask sunburst, scared the living sould outta me, said pale with his eyes rounder than a golf ball.

- AHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!, screamed sunburst.

sunburst ran into the woods without any particular reason, finsup22 was sitting in the corner staring.

- WTH happened to sunburst?, asked pale.

- finsup22 what's wrong? why you looking at me like that?, asked dp desperate......

"sun come back!!"yelled dp running after her
she looked like she was in a trance. before dp and sun was a ghost as cleare as day.
the ghost looked at her and said nothing but she nodded. when the ghost left a few minutes later she fainted and dp dragged her back.

Dp got lost and soon got tired of dragging sunburst, but he luckily found a house, this house wasn't normal, it was incredibly big, old and it gave an eery feeling. The doors where scratch and made of wood, actually the whole house was made of wood, a wooden palace, the windows where very big and scratch too. Dp doesn't like this place at all but he knows that if he stays out in the forest we would end up dying with his mate.

- Oh, please wake up sunburst, says dp.

Dp saw sunburst's face, it was very pale and cold, he knew the sunburst would die if he didn't get him/her some warm. So without thinking it twice this time, he got into the house, as soon as he oppened the door he saw extreme darkness wich almost looked like it wanted to get out of the house, it was hard to breath in the house, the air felt thick and cold. dp sees a candel but how should he light it? dp goes deeper into the house with the candel on his left hand and sunburst on his other hand in hope to find some heat, warmth for his friend, the house got darker and darker the deeper you went it, it was like the darkness wanted to eat you, at one point dp coudn't see the walls anymore, but he knew he was walking a long aisle so he walked in a straight line touching the walls hoping to find a room.

After a long walk on this almost neverending aisle dp finally finds a door, surprisingly this door was in a very well state, he opens it and finds a very big room with a very big bed, he lies sunburst on the bed next to a fire place. Now is when he realises that all the candel lamps and fireplace is lighted. How could this be? Is there somebody living here? How could somebody still live in an old house in the middle of the forest? The house sounded very quiet and cosy so dp says to himself that he should find some dry clothes, for him and sunburst, he searches all closets, cabinets, drawers and while doing this he finds a very well decorated chest, this chest was unlocked so he opens it and finds a diary, the cover was very old and dusty and the title said:
The Diary of Mr Kol. In very beautiful but twisted letters, he tries to open the diary but finds that it is locked closed................................................................

Just then a mighty goosh of rushing wind blew out the candle.

as owlscrying swooped out taking the light with her...

"come back!!"yelled dp running after her again.
just then owls droped her in a hole which dp jumps after and apperes back in the house.
sun is sill past out white faced.

dp follows owlscrying, he leaves sunburst all alone.
meanwhile:
sunburst wakes up in a old house, shivering she looks around. she knew that ghost, but could it be...? she gets up and walks around. the house seems old, and familar. She had been here before. she heard something moving outside. she looks out the window and see a big shadow creature running into the house. She then left the room to explore.

the shadow was infront of her.
it was pale.
"guys i found her!!"yelled pale
just the dp and owl came back.
"were did u go you've been gone for 2 hours." said dp.
"you left me here!" screamed sun.
"then i must of grabbed a fake!" exclaimed dp

"another strong moment for you huh" said sunburst. "You lefted me here a week ago when we were playing tag remember?"
dp did not remember because he had short term memory.
"so there's a fake sunburst running around?" said dp
"that can't be good" owl said looking away quickly when her eyes met with suns.

"we must find her, fast!"said dp, "who know what troble she could get sun in!"
so our heros start off on the longest journey of thier whole membership a UM.

along the way they run into darrkmoonbride, "whats up guys?" she asked "they all looked at each other, "we are looking for a fake sunburst" said dp Darrkmoonbride looked at them all with a raised eye brow, dp continued, "you know, like a double...." "oooohhhhhh" darrk replied, "need some help?"
So then darrk was on the mission to find the fake sunburst. Theyd been travelling for about 5 hours when suddenly out jumped a giant pink bunny wearing sunnies smoking a cigarette and carrying an AK47!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Everyone screamed and ran for cover, "what the hell are you all screaming about?" said the bunny. Dont you know there are giant butterflies here with fangs that will tear the fuzz off my butt if i get too close?"

they all stared in confusment.
"i hear ya guyz are lookin for a fake sunburst. i might have so answers." said the bunny
"you;ve seen her?"asked sun
"ya but its not a she, shes a he."
everyone gasped.
pale had a blank look on his face

[uh huh]
"wait a second," pale said looking confuse but at the same time he had this weird look upon his face that made sun shiver "one's a guy?"
"kinda..." said the bunny, trying to explain the best "it" could. "It changes from guy to girl to animal to anything really. It's kinda like a ghost, or like an evil twin of suns."
All looking complety freaked out, and some were trying to erase the memory from their minds. Sun was repressing it. So they moved on through the night, into a dark cobweb hall-way, where they would hear a grandfather clock hitting midnight.

just then a shadow creacher appered and grabbed dp and flung him sccros the room.

"Yey!!!!!" shooted sun and pale. Pale then picked her up and run away with her into the nigh
"Wtf!!" dp said getting up. "I get thrown across the room and they-." he brought himself to a stop. The shadow was moving again.

then it started to chase pale and sun.

but the shadow was 2 late, sun had already teleported them off. so the shadow rounded back on dp and moonbride.

then they appered back right before it was about to get them.
"did ya miss me?"asked sun
"yes yes yes!!!"replied dp in a frantic motion."ok ok srry help us"
then sun used her majical powers to........

to disappered with pale again. this time it was permated. he could her saying "i reget nothing!!!" she was really gone with him this time. dp startd 2 cry, and darkmoon slapped him 2 knock him out of it.

"this is no time to panic!!"said darkmoon
just then the ghost from before came and the shadow creacher died from the site of it.
meanwhile sun and pale appered in a giant hole

in the giant hole were treasures beyond belief!!! they could not believe their eyes!! sun and pale looked at each other in delight, sun reached over to pick up a shiny coin when they heard a huge roar!!!! A giant dragon was protecting the treasure!!! "WHAT ARE YOU DOING IN MY HOLE?" boomed the dragon.....

"Doing what the hell we feel like" says Pale with the biggest grin on his face, Sunburst giggles because she saw that Pale had pick up a sword and had it right behind him. "omg your such a stupid dragon" sunburst says with glee.

The dragon was offended, "HOW DARE YOU SPEAK TO ME IN SUCH A MANNER!!! WHO DO YOU THINK YOU ARE??!!!" he puffs out his chest, takes a deep breath, pale and sun look at each other, they both know whats coming, they look at each other with worried glances, what were they going to do? they had but a second to act before the dragon rained a fire storm upon them............

.....meanwhile, halfway across town, ernesto and gus were unloading the pool cleaning supplies from the van and carrying them into the shop.
"i swear" said ernesto, "if i find one more skunk stuck in a filter, i quit"
"yeah" grunted gus.
gus never really did say much, and it drove ernesto nuts.
They closed up the shed and walked into the office of the pool supply company they worked for. Andrea was sitting at the desk doing something terribly unimportant at the computer, and never lifted her head to look at them.
"is gary in?" ernesto asked.
"sure" said andrea.
gus and ernesto then walked down the hall to the office of their boss, and pushed the door open.
Gary was stuffing his face with a bean burrito, and ernesto sat down.
"no more" said ernesto.
"no more what?" said gary.
"no more going to the besner house, it's getting to be too much, and there's nothing wrong with her pool. nothing that getting a husband wouldn't fix."
"uh huh" said gary wiping burrito from his face. " and what did she do this time?"

"there was another skunk in her drain!"replied ernesto
meanwhile dp and moon where walking on a dirt path.
"how could she do that to us and who was that ghost?"asked dp
"the only explanation was that wasnt the right sun because the real sun would of helped us."
dp stoped.
"then that means pale is in trouble we must help him. and so is the real sun!!!" exclamied dp

Suddenly out of no where apeared a ghost, but this wasn't a normal ghost, it was Ghostkol, leader of the dead who killed Hades and took his throne.

- This story is %%%%%% up, said Ghostkol.

- Hey watch those words mister, by the way who the hell are you?, asked dp

- DON'T TELL ME WHAT TO DO!, screamed Ghostkol, they sky got dark, covered in clouds, suddenly dp had a storm over him and his mates. I AM GHOSTKOL LEADER OF THE DEAD, I KILLED HADES AND WATATATATATATA, BLAH BLAH BLAH BLAH.

Dp falls unconcious and wakes up in a dark place.

"wuh? where am i"asked dp
"you are in the land of majical fairys" said a voice
"huh who said that?asked dp
a little farie poped out behind a couch.
"i here your looking for your friend sunburst."
"ya have u seen here?" asked dp
"she is being held captive on candy mountin."said the farie

meanwhile

the dragon was about to breathe a hell fire on Pale and sunburst. but sunburst thought to fast, she pointed her finger at the dragon and it magically went away. pfht, she thought to herself, i can't believe they made dragon blood illegal i swear they are just annoying enough-but she stopped thinking. As Pale was going crazy over the gold they have found. Sunburst saw something off in the distance.
It looked like her, but it was darker, she could see that there was a little of light clinging to this other her, but the darkness followed her. But as soon as she saw it, it disappered. what the-

meanwhile ernesto was swearning under his breathe. The boss was insane, making them go back to that place.

"Just relax." said gus who was calmly driving them back there, "we just have to clean the pool and we are gone. It's not like we have to live there."

"Yeah I guess" said ernesto as they were pulling back up to the house. the lights were on, it looked like someone was inside. and they could see owlscrying sitting on the roof.

And suddenly out of nowhere apeared a ghost, this time is was hooded.

-Who are you? aksed pale

- I am Ghostkol, leader of the dead, murderer of Hades, who took his thr.............

- Oh shut it, said sun.

-DON'T TELL ME WH........

-Dude shut up, said pale.

- LET ME FINISH MY SENTEN........

-Dude relax, said sun.

- DONT TELL ME WH......

- Lets go pale, said sunburst.

-ARGH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Ghostkol unleashes another storm, sunburst and pale fall unconcious, then they wake up in a dark place.

<wuts up with you and dark places ghostkol lmao>
"wa where are we?" asked sun
"i dont know but the floors squishy" replyed pale
sun gets up and walks to the window. it was made of candy.
"oh good golly gosh sunburst we're on candy mountin!!!!" screamed pale

A soft thump was heard from behind. They turned and found themselves before a small baby rabbit looking back at them. It pooped, smiled at what he had accomplished, and asked if he could be their friend.

"awwww...." said sun
"wait sun we dont know if hes evil."
"but look at him " said sun
just then the rabbit transformed into another shadow creacher.
"oh, sh** not another one."said pale
"come with me." it said

[this is turning fricking gay]

without thinking sun opened the blind and let the sunlight in, it burned the shadow creature and it disappeared.

[lmao]
meanwhile dp and moon are on there way to save sun and pale from candy mountin.
"why the heak are we saving them again?" asked moon
"ummm... i dont know but lets go for pizza before, they can wait."
"yey!!" said moon

THE PIZZA BAR IS CLOSED. Said a sign on the door.

Later they went for the candy bar.

THE CANDY BAR IS CLOSED. Said a sign on the door.

Later they went for the ice cream bar.

THE ICE CREAM BAR IS CLOSED. Said a sign on the door.

....... later they went for the chocolate bar.

- I bet it is closed too, said moon

THE CHOCOLATE BAR I CLOSED. Said a sign on th.......... wait a minute..... hold a sec..... rewind the tape..... the chocolate bar?

NO PETS ALLOWED.

-...........

"what about the smothie place." said dp
"ummm... ok lets see." said moon

just then the sky opened up and everything thing was vaporized. just like that, whole towns , cities, countries all where gone in the blink of an eye. the only thing that was left was a shell of a planet, now drifting in the cold, dark regions of space. humanity had wasted the day.

When all hope was lost pale woke up in the chocolate bar passed out in a bowl of now melted chocolate"holy greasy s*** batman" says pale "why did i let all this chocolate melt?" he whines. "hey sun weren't we in a dark place with nasty cute things?" pale asks in confusion.

"sun?"
no answer.
"helloooo sun?"
no answer
"where did she go?" said pale
he went and started to walk around then he saw something outside the chocolate bar.
"what the....?"asked pale
"i guess the whole everyone dies thing was a dream"

Pale feels a pressure inside his chest then the rest of his body he starts smelling things that normal people can't smell at such a distace, then his eyes feel weird he see's in a diferent way like distanace and clearity. he hadn't noticed before but his arms were getting hairier, his chest was getting harder, then came the pain of his face reconstruting on it's own into a longer more bold muzzle, and he was getting taller for his legs had elongated, then he blacked out.

when he woke up it was raining.
"ow my head..." said pale
his head was throbbing and he felt like he was flaming
then he found a puddle and he looked in it.
he was a werwolf!!!
then there was something in a closet shaking!!!

"Hello?" pale calling out with a calm but growly voice "Sunburst is that you?" pale now wondering what happened between him blacking out and now.

oh sun where have you been? what happened to you and why am i a werewolf?

{lmao ghostkol!!!!! }

The world seemed darker, seemed less alive. A frighting chill went down the backs of any who saw. It was not a dream. It seemed that the life, the joy and the happeness of the whole world was sucked dry. All was lefted was the screaming of people, the sound of car alarms going off in the distance. Every1 was so afraid of something, they were all running around screaming, but no threat could be found. [kinda like batman begins:)]

Sun woke up in a dark alley far away from all her friends. She saw three moons in the sky, one in the shape of a heart, the other a full moon over the water, and the last one right in the middle of the sky a half moon. The stars were a plenty and the air was cold. She could hear the screaming and the breaking of glass all around her. What was going on?

She got up and walked to the main street. It was far beyond choas what see saw

meanwhile dp was....

with moon trying to find their friends
"they cant be too far."said moon
"wait there in the ally!! its sun!!" exclaimed dp
sun was surrounded by humans if thats what they were.
they had weapons and they had blood dripping from their mouths.
"ahhhh!!!!!!!" screamed sun.
then the fary appered and gave him a weapon, it was a pp7 and a machine gun, kinda like a tommy gun.
"get down sun!!" screamed dp
this time she lisioned and she ducked down and dp blasted all the evil civilians

Then pale walked up with sunburst's doppleganger over his shoulder, "hey sun" says pale in a cheerful but grouly voice.
"where you been? you missed my big bowl full of chocolate. Oh and look who i found shivering in a closet?" pale shows by hanging the limp passedout body by one leg.