Just to keep everything in order, put your comments and ideas here instead of original thread.

Should El Chupacabra be involved in this story?

moe is a bit slow today. drugged up on nyquil: probably the reason for my strange postings.
Uh ....blah....yeah. Ill be on the story later tonight once da kids are sleepin and i get some free time.
dont get too far ahead of me...

OK... it looks like there is a confusion between characters Jade and Jasmine

Character list:
1. Jade - "the chosen one", a young girl prophecized to be a warrior. She has nightmares that may be caused by a curse. She doesn't have any family left.

2. Jasmine - Jade's best friend. She is somehow involved in Jade's curse. The prophecy said that she is going to die.

3. Aunt Cessie - Somebody who told the girls about the curse. It is unknown how she found out about it.

4. Draclula - A vampire who believes in the prophecy and protects Jade, but his real intention is unknown.

5. "the beast" - unknown character. enemy of the vampires. Jade was attacked once, but she was saved by Draclula.

rules:
send a blank message with <writing> as you type. That way you won't get anybody to send something ahead of you. The edit your blank message and put your addition to the story.

i was wonmdering about that myself..i was thinking " what happened to my Jade?"

Good idea Penguin

Doomie

Glad that you joined our little story writing thingy, along with Moe, Cross, Joc, Soulfire, Lionel and anyone else that I may have forgotten

my mind is full of them, don't stop on me now

Ooops....I posted a comment before I read the rest of the threads oh well, I still love this "writing" thread. I haven't written creatively in years, and it feels great to start up again.

Why do there allways have to be Vampires , I don't mean to be picky but allways Vampires . I remember when Bea Arthur was the anti hero in our stories . I miss Bea

Don't worry abt it soulfire, just glad to have you join us

And actually it is supposed to be Draclula, not Dracula. Slight but a little bit of difference. And as for why is in the story? Well I just thought him up as a minor character but he's seemed to take on a life of his own.

(Maybe he's contoling my thoughts". Starts humming "Twilight Zone" theme.

Fixed my spelling for Draclula

Well, vampires are cool. But we can always put El Chupacabra in if you want to

I like vampires, as for that other thing lol

human human or vampire human Penguin?

Human human, just to add the confusion. Let's see how are you going to resolve that

Well the chup is rather like a wolf like beast, at least supposedly. So grow him about 4 times and make him our beast. Then every one can be happy. Whats your thought on that psypenguin?

I don't know about the rest of you but I would like greatly to get a copy of this posting in its entirty when it is finished. Any thoughts about this? I mean it would be a shame to not be able to keep it for memories sake. Although if any of you would object for fear of it being sold i would certainly understand.

Hi people,could someone fill me in on whats going on?Please im kinda confused,this is the first iv heard of this little thing u guys got goin,where can i find the original thread to read it?If it isn't too much hassle.Thanx people

Well, I would like to get a copy as well, preferably a well-edited one, with additions here and there and spelling errors removed. I think the copy must be available for free, or if it is printed one should not take any profit from it nor take credits from it.

BTW the name of our girl vampire is Jade. Jasmine is dead

thefirstman you should be able to find the original thread. It's title is "Writing".

Ok edited all my postings back to Jade Ithink if I missed any please tell me. And I am all for the idea of free distribution. This is just for fun, and I don't want anyone to feel burned.

Oh bugger, we have a problem now, I've brought Drac back in the spirit world, but Cross has him alive again, what do we do???????????????????


I have been down loading this story and taking out the comments and such, if you want a copy just let me know

What !!!! did I miss a posting


(Clickes on mouse)


( Ok. Dracs dead now. Waaaaa!!!)


( The story should run together fine.)

amen. distribute away! As far as Im concerned. all this was off the top of my head. Ive got my own story in the works anyways.
Sorry i killed drac. I just had too. We needed a tragic hero , no?

Sure. Sniff.


But hell this is sure fun. I mean this is one of the few chances I have to let my darkside come out.

Ok guys, I've finished fixing our story, by taking out the comments and forum stuff, it's in html format, or if you like I can put it in doc. I've coloured so that we know who wrote what.

If you want a copy, just pm me with your email address or if you like I can give you my non forum email address

or if you would like I can hide it one the net and give you the link, just let me know


Doomie

If their was a cheap way to post a link to the finished verion on the web that would be great. Let us just keep the address known only to those who contributed. As seeing I have no problem trusting all of us, but there are those out there who might not feel so inclined as to honor each others good faith.

I've added the copyright to our story, with my email address, if anyone does find it and emails me, I will post their email here for us to see and as a group we can decided what to do, but I doubt anyone will find it, I've put meta tags in that will stop that

The story u guys are writing is bloody great!!!The imagery is fantastic and the contrast of the lonliness,humanity and the bloodlust is great.I cant wait for the next post ,im all excitedd now.Well done guys,bloody great(see what i did there ).

Thanks for say so Man nice to know that it's going well

Think we got carried away Cross, could be here a while waiting, they might get us I'm not scared

I know that was a "little" on the long side. But my honor depended on me killing Adieus, he slew my character; and i'm still not over the grieving period. I'll try and hold off for a little while to compenstate.

at some point I want to write a chapter from the villains perspective,, just for eome variety. Ive got it worked out who sent adieus after drac.

also... Jade's vampire clan needs a name. any thoughts?

did it make you feel all manly killing the bady cross

Good idea moe - how abt we start that at chapter 4

Gret plan Moe. I myself am curious to know who sent him

(Loads silver bullets into SKS aussault rifle."Shhheeccaock." Cock's weapon. "Ok I'm ready, last I checked I could hit a target at 300 yd." Smiles wickedly.')

(How about the "Hellstorm Faction?")

(And yes Doomie, it did. But I'm still thirsty for the rest of their blood.")

Who sent Adieus? Hmmm... let me think ...

OK I think I have an idea, but it is not fun if I tell you guys now. The point is to let the story writes itself rather than planning it ahead of time. It is more fun that way, as we get some unexpected surpises. Like Drac's death, and it turns out the the vengeance does not take too long. I expected Adieus to be the ultimate enemy.. but... uh well... he's dead

Yeah your right, see who gets to discovery where he came from, it shocked me when moe killed drac, but it's good having a few writing, keeps you guessing alright



Ok guy, 6am, think it's time I went to bed, I've updated the story to moe's ** a moment for the bad guys ** and I will do more later.

Have fun

Doomie

an uggh.. an army of riders? Duvessa belongs to a "house" not a militia. I meant "dispatch" as in "send out"
....oi... the riders were to be taken as a few elite assassins.... not an epic battle scene like LOTR. *pulls hair* I was willing to see past the cliche "chosen one" motif found in too many fictional stories. but an army of vampires??? c'mon now.
creative differences were bound to happen sooner or later I suppose. Its cool. Good work guys! But I think Moe will leave the rest of the story to you. Now have at it and keep on flowing.

Thank for the contibutions Moe! It was nice having a posting without contant arguing. Just good old fashion Gothic Horror creativity.

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( "Oh yeah. I found a dealer in Botswanie who's got 50 cal. Machine gun and the silver bullets to go with it!!!. I wonder if he can FedEx it to Jade? It might come in handy with those 500,00 dudes." Dials phone. "Hello can I speak To Mummar Gahdafi? Oh thanks. Hey Ghadafi I hear you want to get rid of some weapons of mass destruction? Do you have anything modified with silver?")

Uhm... well.. now we have an elite army

Anyway, it's still cool Moe. Keep on writing whenever you want


(scratching his head figuring a way how a girl can handle 500,000 riders)

1 vs. 500,000. My sentiments exactly penguin.
Have fun with that one.

Hasta La Vista Vampies. JAAA!!!

Hey,hooked guys,ever publish this and i'll willingly buy it .As for the 500,000 strong riders(damn),you could try and somehow get the beasts/wolves army involved in the battle to make it a 3 way thing,that would cut down the number considerably.Just my suggestions.Keep it up

Hey,im going to post a reply to the story,i PM'd ppsychic but got no reply,sorry if im invading here,i cant contain myself.

Sry, but I think the story was going no where, thought abt broadening it a liitle, giving it more range.

Letting my evil side take over again



ps with only a few days before xmas, I'd just like to wish you all a merry xmas and a happy and safe new year for you and your familys

doomie

And May You Have A Blessed Christmas Likewise.

Monday, 22 December 2003 Min 21° Max 34° but I can tell you Firstman, it was hotter then that today, I'm still melting so did my icey pole, all down my arm

Well its way into the minus down here i think.Really cold.Anyways im off now,the band practice calls.Be back tonight to make up for the lost time.Later

OK.. we are back on track. Now we have tons of new characters

Updated list:
1. Jade - "the chosen one", a young girl prophecized to be a warrior. She has nightmares that may be caused by a curse. She doesn't have any family left.

2. Jasmine - Jade's sister. She is somehow involved in Jade's curse. The prophecy said that she is going to die.

3. Aunt Cessie - Somebody who told the girls about the curse. It is unknown how she found out about it.

4. Draclula - A vampire who believes in the prophecy and protects Jade, but his real intention is unknown.

5. Dimodeus - Jasmine's mentor, replacing Draclula after he was killed by Adieus

6. Adieus - vampire slayer who killed Draclula.

7. "the beast" - Enemy of the vampires. Jade was attacked once, but she was saved by Draclula. They are controlled by a group of werewolves, simply known as the Arcons.

8. Duvessa - leader of a rival vampire faction.

9. Cronan - Vampire general working for Duvessa

miscelaneous characters: Jade's father, the priest, Lord Polonius etc.

Gave a name to the priest of the vampire's that we encountered in the second chapter. Markova.