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Emily Dickinson
Speak

The world leaves me momentarily where I can
find you
among the words on paper.
Filling me with a whisper
and a chill.
It doesn’t matter that you are not
here.
You exist in my mind or perhaps
my soul
and it is just
enough to move me closer
to me and to you
and all the others who
have been here before us, lingering
in the afterglow of glorious poetry.

In those phrases this tangible place fades
away, and with it,
a new world is born.

Speak to me.
glassvampire
Beautiful as always
Sea
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Emily Dickinson
Thanks, Vamp

& Sea.
glassvampire
This, a touch... I don't know, maybe lighter than the others you've posted, or maybe just not as dark.

And as the others which were just as beautifully done, still a sadness.

"...lingering in the afterglow of glorious poetry"

So very well put.

Very nice work and welcome to UM, I hope you'll be happy here

and I liked the way you called me "Vamp"
Emily Dickinson
Vamp,

A touch, yes, from beyond.

Lt_Ripley
thank you for that.
Emily Dickinson
You are welcome.
LogicalPiccolo
QUOTE(cruzer @ Aug 19 2007, 11:41 PM) *
Speak

The world leaves me momentarily where I can
find you
among the words on paper.
Filling me with a whisper
and a chill.
It doesn’t matter that you are not
here.
You exist in my mind or perhaps
my soul
and it is just
enough to move me closer
to me and to you
and all the others who
have been here before us, lingering
in the afterglow of glorious poetry.

In those phrases this tangible place fades
away, and with it,
a new world is born.

Speak to me.


Wow.

Yeah. Wow.

I don't know why I found this so impressive (I don't mean that the way it sounds tongue.gif ) I just mean...this really just jumped at me for some reason. Your rhythm is near flawless and it is well...enchanting...this is tranquility and inspiration bound by the words of a glorious minded poet. I really enjoyed this thank you for sharing.

I believe you have left ME with that whisper and chill. thumbsup.gif
Emily Dickinson
Wow - thank you for the kind words.
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