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Lilith Incarnate
And the sky, it burns like fire
My world it comes apart
You're up there now, just laughing,
Laughing
'Cause you ripped out my heart
Slowly I am giving in
My heart is black as coal
You've left me cold and empty
You've destroyed my very soul
So now I stand here screaming
My mind is lost to rage
My only wish
For death to come
So I can turn that page.
Ghost Ship
I have felt that way. Nice poem.
Ambriel
QUOTE(Bloodmoonbride @ Aug 31 2007, 02:35 AM) *
And the sky, it burns like fire
My world it comes apart
You're up there now, just laughing,
Laughing
'Cause you ripped out my heart
Slowly I am giving in
My heart is black as coal
You've left me cold and empty
You've destroyed my very soul
So now I stand here screaming
My mind is lost to rage
My only wish
For death to come
So I can turn that page.


Powerful, Angry, Unyielding. There is an awesomely loathsome and disgusted feel of this, I too have felt it as deep as you have written it. Great job.
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