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Arcana
Ghost
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Listen to my voice, I want you to hear
To me you will always be so dear
Though you don't see me, I'm very near
Don't be afraid, don't show me fear

For I have journeyed from far away
To be with you, this very day
Oh how I wish you could hear me say
My love for you will never stray

If only I could feel you on my arm
Or hold your hand & feel your palm
To laugh & kiss & share your charm
Or keep you safe from all life's harm

My caress is little more than a breeze
Hope it doesn't make you ill at ease
I see you shiver, I make you freeze
Now I'm beside you on my knees

You'll always mean so much to me
I'll come & visit you to help & see
You through your grief & misery
For I have all of eternity

Our lives can never last forever
But part of us remains together
Though I still try & still endeavour
I can't cheat death, I'm not that clever

© Arcana
Owlscrying

deeply prismatic
awesome read!!! original.gif
Arcana
QUOTE(owlscrying @ Sep 22 2007, 09:18 AM) *

deeply prismatic
awesome read!!! original.gif

Thankyou for your comment owlscrying, glad you enjoyed it. thumbsup.gif
swtp
This is just an amazing piece! It brought tears to my eyes as it reminds me of someone loved and who is now gone! crying.gif thumbsup.gif
Arcana
To be able to touch someone with words & stir their emotions is the greatest compliment of all swtp................many thanks for your reply. thumbsup.gif
TheEyesCanSee
Our lives can never last forever
But part of us remains together


How beautiful, but these few words say it all for me, in life as in death. Cheers Arcana
J.B.
It did not move me like it did the others, for my own reasons, but it was still a very lovely poem that in my opinion did indeed show the viewpoint of a ghost. Good work, I hope to see more come from you.
2spookie
crying.gif I like your poem..very nice. Your poems are done very well. Great reading!
goalienan
All of your poems are excellent...This one especially, as it made me feel that a loved one is still close to me...Thanks thumbsup.gif
Regency
Lovely poem Arcana. Nice one. thumbsup.gif
She-ra
Namaste my friend original.gif Brilliant as always.
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