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SatyamShivamSundaram
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nights i cried
mintues feeling like prison
spreading it's dark wings in pain it wraps around me
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times i was told no one loved me
more alone in a farplane abyss
evil reflections that no one sees,
that no one understands
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times we bled
crimson tears rolling down our face
black eyes with tainted souls
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times we fought
each day making it worse
we drop off only to return to that place of pain and fear
dead flowers at my door
with lost and empty hugs
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times i have felt this way
gone unnoticed until this day
and was told it would be okay
Owlscrying

most profound sun! original.gif
love how you use few words that have many meanings -
keep up the awesome writings!!!
Steven (The Fallen Angel)
Keep em comin love! I can always identify and when you write these, I don't have to write my own to describe my feelings, yours do it just as well.
SatyamShivamSundaram
grin2.gif thanks guys. always love hearing your comments!!! yes.gif
swtp
So beautiful and so sad! It,s really very good! yes.gif thumbsup.gif
She-ra
That was truly impressive Sun! I loved it!! Please write some more original.gif xo, Jody
SatyamShivamSundaram
tongue.gif . again thanks guys.
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