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Themis
Pain

Such pain is tearing my chest
I feel it twisting and curling
I feel the flesh
ripping and tearing
the blood
pooling at its edges
My fingers curl
upon themselves to imprint
into my palms
that little pain will stop the rest
My eyes
too tired
to cry
anymore
I take a deep breath
I open my eyes
I look down
no blood
no gaping wound
just me
and this empty place
but still the pain
in my heart
Leonardo
Very poignant, Themis. Has vivid imagery and a lot of pathos. I like it!
She-ra
WOW girly!! This is strong hun:
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Such pain is tearing my chest
I feel it twisting and curling
I feel the flesh
ripping and tearing


Very nice writing. I love you ♥ Jody
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