Kissmet31
Oct 5 2007, 01:56 AM
Words by Kissmet30
In a blink of an eye my life flashed before me
My heart was gripped with fear, I was under his mercy
I was face to face with death in a dark corner street
It's sharp knife pointed against my neck I was cold down to my feet
I wanted to succumb at one point and let him take me away
But someone sent beautiful angels to save me that day
I looked death in the eyes and it wasn't really that bad
Cause life is as cruel anyway and that's what make me sad
If I elope with death then life can no longer hurt me
Can death become life and from it's pain can it set me free?
swtp
Oct 5 2007, 03:05 AM
Its true courage to allow your heart to feel so much and bear it so openly! Thats a rare gift, thank you for sharing it!
SG Wolf 222
Oct 5 2007, 02:57 PM
hmmmm.. indeed this is a very good poem...you sure do make alot of these work of arts in one day...but all are soo beautiful =)...like some one i know =D... ima read your other ones...im sure without a doubt that they will be amazing just like the rest have and always will be.
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