Here's just a poem I decided to write. It was actually inspired by a girl I work with. I encourage feed back on what you might think of it, but don't be too harsh, lol.
You have consumed me,
What I was now belongs to you
I am nothing, I matter not
You are all I see
The sparkling of your brown eyes
The way your blond hair bounces around your shoulders when you walk
The shine of your flawlessly smooth silky skin
You are like my reflection,
no matter where I look all I ever see is you
Every moment I'm not with you is agony,
and at the same time it hurts worse when I'm near you
Looking upon all that I want and knowing that I can't have
pain undescribable
I love you, and I can see in your eyes you care for me too
Just in a different way
Love you already have, to late was I
Picked up you were, and carried away before I ever even knew to be looking for you
You seem to always be on the move,
busy, working, living
If nothing from you I can have, then the littlest desire would be to catch you
like a beatuifully colored bird in a net I would wrapp my arms around you and hold you
Perhaps like a new bird that gets used to its handler you'd stay after I let you go
Instead of fluttering off you'd perch yourself at my side
But no, that would never happen
Who am I that you would stay?
Maybe if I just told you how I feel?
Maybe
If I mentioned how my entire being vibrated with delight at the sight of you
If I mentioned how your charms snare me over and over again
Were I to cup my hands around yours, fall to my knees, and put myself at your mercy
Would that stir your heart for me?
Would you fall into me
Proclaim how I too have secretly been a reflection of yours everywhere you looked?
Alas, a dreamer's dreams
All and nothing more
Mine are just the hopes of a future that will never be
The One I love loves, but not me
She loves, but not me
That's all there is
And nothing more.....
Full Version: All and Nothing More
QUOTE(TheEssenceofExcellence @ Oct 5 2007, 03:27 PM) 
Here's just a poem I decided to write. It was actually inspired by a girl I work with. I encourage feed back on what you might think of it, but don't be too harsh, lol.
You have consumed me,
What I was now belongs to you
I am nothing, I matter not
You are all I see
The sparkling of your brown eyes
The way your blond hair bounces around your shoulders when you walk
The shine of your flawlessly smooth silky skin
You are like my reflection,
no matter where I look all I ever see is you
Every moment I'm not with you is agony,
and at the same time it hurts worse when I'm near you
Looking upon all that I want and knowing that I can't have
pain undescribable
I love you, and I can see in your eyes you care for me too
Just in a different way
Love you already have, to late was I
Picked up you were, and carried away before I ever even knew to be looking for you
You seem to always be on the move,
busy, working, living
If nothing from you I can have, then the littlest desire would be to catch you
like a beatuifully colored bird in a net I would wrapp my arms around you and hold you
Perhaps like a new bird that gets used to its handler you'd stay after I let you go
Instead of fluttering off you'd perch yourself at my side
But no, that would never happen
Who am I that you would stay?
Maybe if I just told you how I feel?
Maybe
If I mentioned how my entire being vibrated with delight at the sight of you
If I mentioned how your charms snare me over and over again
Were I to cup my hands around yours, fall to my knees, and put myself at your mercy
Would that stir your heart for me?
Would you fall into me
Proclaim how I too have secretly been a reflection of yours everywhere you looked?
Alas, a dreamer's dreams
All and nothing more
Mine are just the hopes of a future that will never be
The One I love loves, but not me
She loves, but not me
That's all there is
And nothing more.....
You have consumed me,
What I was now belongs to you
I am nothing, I matter not
You are all I see
The sparkling of your brown eyes
The way your blond hair bounces around your shoulders when you walk
The shine of your flawlessly smooth silky skin
You are like my reflection,
no matter where I look all I ever see is you
Every moment I'm not with you is agony,
and at the same time it hurts worse when I'm near you
Looking upon all that I want and knowing that I can't have
pain undescribable
I love you, and I can see in your eyes you care for me too
Just in a different way
Love you already have, to late was I
Picked up you were, and carried away before I ever even knew to be looking for you
You seem to always be on the move,
busy, working, living
If nothing from you I can have, then the littlest desire would be to catch you
like a beatuifully colored bird in a net I would wrapp my arms around you and hold you
Perhaps like a new bird that gets used to its handler you'd stay after I let you go
Instead of fluttering off you'd perch yourself at my side
But no, that would never happen
Who am I that you would stay?
Maybe if I just told you how I feel?
Maybe
If I mentioned how my entire being vibrated with delight at the sight of you
If I mentioned how your charms snare me over and over again
Were I to cup my hands around yours, fall to my knees, and put myself at your mercy
Would that stir your heart for me?
Would you fall into me
Proclaim how I too have secretly been a reflection of yours everywhere you looked?
Alas, a dreamer's dreams
All and nothing more
Mine are just the hopes of a future that will never be
The One I love loves, but not me
She loves, but not me
That's all there is
And nothing more.....
Wow this is excellent work... teh girl form your work is so lucky to have had a poem meant for hers and not just any other poem but one with such emotions. I love it .
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