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Words by Kissmet30

I cradle my broken heart as it bleeds profusely
The wounds are beyond healing that I can see
I hear the cold wind blowing, feeling it through my hair
Then the radio played a sad love song on the air
A dark cloud was billowing above a now greying sky
Then it changed form into what I thought was you,right before my eye
I blinked away the thought of you for it only triggers pain
As the raindrops began to fall slowly on my window pane
SG Wolf 222
wow....sounds like what you do for me. but this is very good i love it bebe very nice. reminds me of what i used to do...but thanks to you i no longer have it original.gif salamat kita
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[quote name='kissmet30' date='Oct 6 2007, 10:57 AM' post='1921717']
Words by Kissmet30

kissmet, you should publish these in a book if you haven't alrady. the three on here today are exceptional.
it's very rare that i'm moved by poetry so thrice in one day is......
Kissmet31
QUOTE(SG Wolf 222 @ Oct 11 2007, 03:18 PM) *
wow....sounds like what you do for me. but this is very good i love it bebe very nice. reminds me of what i used to do...but thanks to you i no longer have it original.gif salamat kita


aww babe you make me so happy... this doen't happen anymore mahal na mahal kita.. no salamat needed bebe ko
Kissmet31

QUOTE(kissmet30 @ Oct 6 2007, 10:57 AM) *
Words by Kissmet30

kissmet, you should publish these in a book if you haven't alrady. the three on here today are exceptional.
it's very rare that i'm moved by poetry so thrice in one day is......



Thanks for the encouragement, that is so nice to hear. well i actually plan on doing that in the near future.


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