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Kissmet31
Words by Kissmet30

Unde the pale moon, beneath the sky
I sat in solitude and wondered why
I never really knew why you said goodbye
Leaving me with a broken heart,now all I do is cry
The seagulls seem to know how I feel inside
Cause they cry with me as the ebb slowly die
With tears damping my face I whispered your name
Knowing deep inside it will never be the same
The love you gave no longer belongs to me
For she now has your heart, it isn't that hard to see
Now all that's left is a heart that's been torn in two
And I'll take good care of it because it came from you
As I gaze upon the sky I saw a little star
Yes it was smiling at me, I figured, from a far
But I can't smile back I haven't the heart to
Because it's quite obvious that he just broke it in two
He has wounded me deeply but I still love him so
But in love as I am I know I have to let go
The moon shall be my witness. it shall see
How i'll let go of this love, like he's let go of me.


Steven (The Fallen Angel)
I rather like it.... Now I have to write a new one.........
**Fr3@ky Chic**
I like it!! Very cute!!
swtp
A broken heart trying desperatly to heal,it,s so beautifull and well done Kissmet! thumbsup.gif
SG Wolf 222
this one send chills down me spine it was soo good. thanks for reading it to me bebe thanks
Kissmet31
QUOTE(SG Wolf 222 @ Oct 11 2007, 03:14 PM) *
this one send chills down me spine it was soo good. thanks for reading it to me bebe thanks



aww bebe ko no thnaks needed.... mahal na mahal kita bebe ko
Tooth_and_Claw
wow, that is amazing. is it based on something that happened to you...?
Kissmet31
QUOTE(Tooth_and_Claw @ Oct 14 2007, 11:14 PM) *
wow, that is amazing. is it based on something that happened to you...?



well actually it did at one point in time
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