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Caelum
The title of this is called "You."I actually just wrote this a few hours ago, hope you ya'll like it!

You

You said you’d help me,
But all you did was b****,
But you cant seem to see,
That you made me want to ditch,

Look into my eyes,
And tell me all your lies,
Look into my face,
And you’ll know your place,

Its not here its not with me,
Its somewhere else far away,
Far away as the eye can see,
You try to help but fail every day,

How can you help others,
When you cant even help you?
You couldn’t understand the idea of a mother,
Your cruel, I wish you would see the truth,

All those days you attempted to help,
And all those days I slipped further away,
All those days I would yelp,
And all those moments you passively watched the day,

Go by, you’re a spider in a web,
Trapped by its own ignorance,
You cant even begin to understand what’s said,
I cant believe your so belligerent,

I cant believe I was a fly,
Trapped in your web in the sky,
But I’m the one that got away,
Cause I knew I couldn’t stay,

Look into my eyes,
So I can dispel your lies,
Look into my face,
So that you can finally have faith,

Its over when you cannot win,
You don’t even try to fight it,
You don’t even try to atone your sins,
You just stare into the night, reveling in your blight,

A girl who cant stand on her feet,
A girl who cannot sleep,
A girl who cannot dream,
And a girl with out the means,

Your going through life bitter and alone,
I just wish you would see,
I wish you could atone,
I wish you did right by me,

But blatantly you didn’t so now I’m here,
And I am not shedding a tear,
Over your broken and hollow lies,
Instead, I’m reaching for the skies.

IamsSon
Nice poem, Cae. A bit angry.. but nice.
Jjbreen
QUOTE(IamsSon @ Oct 9 2007, 08:49 AM) *
Nice poem, Cae. A bit angry.. but nice.


It's actually very good and I think articulates the frustration w/the games some people play the masks they wear ....
Ghø§t
Very nice caelum. tongue.gif
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