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Aesahaettr
this is an older one of my poems, but i still like it.


Station


It is too bright in
Here
Is the way
Out of

Time

Place

Energy

Efficient malfunction
Dyfunction myopic
Static weeping keeping
Me awake
Just a
Little more
For me
Please sir may I have another?

Shrivel
Whimper
Distant
Shutter in the mist
Rhungobains
Reading that seems to remind me of Radiohead's fitter, happier.

Not the classic stanza style, but it's good.
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