Mcr13
Feb 10 2008, 12:47 AM
Here is a thread where you can let out your soul and post your poetry.
Please be respectful and don't forget to compliment a poet every now and then....
"Untitled"
The sight is killing me
Burning inside,
As I see you with another.
And how I want to be,
The one,
That stole,
your heart away.....
Mcr13
Feb 10 2008, 01:53 AM
Hehe, just thought of another poem. All the paragraphs are haikus, so it doesn't have much of a beat or anything....
Forever Alone
I am In The Dark,
No One Can See Me Alone,
Yet I am unknown.
Nobody will know,
Because I am so see-through,
No one will see me.
I cannot be seen,
Unless you will open up,
Open Up Your Eyes.
You know you're all blind,
And yet you always blame me,
for your life problems.
So now and for all,
For now and forever fall,
as you will never.
See my empty soul,
all and alone forever,
Forever Alone.
Shadow The Hedgehog
Feb 21 2008, 12:25 AM
I like the second poem. All the paragraphs ARE haikus! And the title for the first on could be stolen heart.