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It feels at times we've been abandoned
A dam buckles under hope & despair
Has joy & happiness only been loaned
Life can sometimes seem so unfair

Tears of joy become replaced with sadness
We gaze down into the mighty abyss
Suffering embraces us with a caress
As sorrow decends to give us a kiss

Another crack in a broken heart
Lying in pieces & scattered asunder
Not shown on any map or chart
A place where many eternally wander

The path to peace is covered in snow
To blindly travel would be a folly
Which way to turn is hard to know
Blinded by the winds of melancholy

The things we carry weigh us down
Becoming a burden to drain our resolve
Tis easy to give up & simply drown
As our world seems to cease to revolve

When hope dangles by a thread
And the path to limbo yawns wider
Take heart & don't succumb to dread
Remember the life of a lowly spider

© Arcana
Antithetic alOne
That's incredible, very nice!
Here's one from a long time ago...

Heart pounding. Stop.
Chest collapsing,
memory lapsing. Stop.
The tremors that rock my soul.
I shake beyond control.
I waiver. I savor
fewer moments in between.
Just change the scene,
my reception isn't clear.
The wavelengths interfere
with my perceptions. Stop.
Take time and think
when you're pushed beyond the brink.
Stop to see, stop to savor
the flavor of one favor
that I haven't done myself.
A craver for the subtle flavor
of resolves up on a shelf.
swtp
QUOTE (Arcana @ Feb 10 2008, 03:10 AM) *
By A Thread

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It feels at times we've been abandoned
A dam buckles under hope & despair
Has joy & happiness only been loaned
Life can sometimes seem so unfair

Tears of joy become replaced with sadness
We gaze down into the mighty abyss
Suffering embraces us with a caress
As sorrow decends to give us a kiss

Another crack in a broken heart
Lying in pieces & scattered asunder
Not shown on any map or chart
A place where many eternally wander

The path to peace is covered in snow
To blindly travel would be a folly
Which way to turn is hard to know
Blinded by the winds of melancholy

The things we carry weigh us down
Becoming a burden to drain our resolve
Tis easy to give up & simply drown
As our world seems to cease to revolve

When hope dangles by a thread
And the path to limbo yawns wider
Take heart & don't succumb to dread
Remember the life of a lowly spider

© Arcana

As you often do with your brilliant poems, your poem has touched me in a very special, personal place and way! Thank you Arcana!
Arcana
Many thanks for your comments, btw swtp, to be able to relate & be touched personally, as you have said, is the greatest compliment anyone can pay, many thanks........peace. thumbsup.gif
Truffles
QUOTE (Arcana @ Feb 10 2008, 06:10 AM) *
By A Thread

linked-image

It feels at times we've been abandoned
A dam buckles under hope & despair
Has joy & happiness only been loaned
Life can sometimes seem so unfair

Tears of joy become replaced with sadness
We gaze down into the mighty abyss
Suffering embraces us with a caress
As sorrow decends to give us a kiss

Another crack in a broken heart
Lying in pieces & scattered asunder
Not shown on any map or chart
A place where many eternally wander

The path to peace is covered in snow
To blindly travel would be a folly
Which way to turn is hard to know
Blinded by the winds of melancholy

The things we carry weigh us down
Becoming a burden to drain our resolve
Tis easy to give up & simply drown
As our world seems to cease to revolve

When hope dangles by a thread
And the path to limbo yawns wider
Take heart & don't succumb to dread
Remember the life of a lowly spider

© Arcana



Very nice original.gif
xCrimsonx
Lovely and inspiering, you have an amaising way of placing your words together perfectly!!!!!

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