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* Mister-E. *
The idea of this one is to create a chain of haikus that tell a story.

You create a standard 5-7-5 syllable haiku that continues
with the story, mood, or feel of the previous haiku

so if someone wrote:

standing terrified
awaiting what might happen
gargoyles at the heels

you might write

demons of ill will
casting leers of dark intent
pounce quickly on prey

so that it continues the story

It may be a little difficult,.. but that's why it's a "challenge".

The first one below will hopefully
be fairly easy to follow:

deep in dark shadows
unseen forces ply their skills
bent on destruction
Owlscrying
QUOTE
* Mister-E. *
deep in dark shadows
unseen forces ply their skills
bent on destruction


celestial cops
patrol unchartered wastelands
evil manifest
Jouster

all things dark beings
furious and seek vengence
strike with no mercy
* Mister-E. *
all innocent ones
flee in stark raving terror
from the dark onslaught
Owlscrying
twilight voices keen
lost sense of directions
disoriented

* Mister-E. *
strength rose from chaos
mounting an opposition
evil force be warned
the red shift
dark forces gather
a sulfuric stench invades
piercing the stale air
She-ra
armed with earthy talent
evil splashed with holy water
absorbs and recoils
nativechick1989
retreat is short lived
forces strengthens its armor
ready to plunge forth
xCrimsonx
a coma induced horizon
of castles filled with blood
distant fear visciously awaits
nativechick1989
all the fools rush in
without any second thoughts
to meet unknown foe
The_Scorpion
not a glimpse of fear
as they enter the unknown
ready for battle
Owlscrying
crashing of thunder
facing ravenous mad wolves
driven by hunger
* Mister-E. *
soldiers of the light
bringing streaks of white tigers
turn to face the wolves
Owlscrying
fleeting images
convergences ultimate
pandemonium

* Mister-E. *
a clash of titans
never before being known
rampant violence
Owlscrying
gargoyles spouting
monolithic monuments
launching silent screams
* Mister-E. *
gargoyles watching all
wolves bare their white fanged teeth
tigers lunge to pounce


great one, Owl !
QUOTE (Owlscrying @ Feb 29 2008, 10:28 AM) *
gargoyles spouting
monolithic monuments
launching silent screams

nativechick1989
a silent stalker
a chameleon of fear
stand still, hold your breath
The_Scorpion
don't move a muscle
pray you will not be noticed
hide in the shadows
Owlscrying
open seclusion
concealing and revealing
cyclonic whirling

She-ra
cyclonic whirling
leaves spin; dance before your eyes
black shadows emerge
Owlscrying
dark encompassing
extinguishing mortal hopes
exhuming chaos

The_Scorpion
goodbye sweet order
anarchy taking control
demolishing all
Owlscrying
evil manifest
vampires sucking attention
cheated of revenge

* Mister-E. *
having lost revenge
vampires plot to strike anew
force of light must act








.
Owlscrying
searing to the bone
languishing of scorching rays
bring advanced retreats

* Mister-E. *
dark seldom retreats
yet the light can vanquish all
demons hide in fear







.
Owlscrying
false truths as decoys
treacherous hearts dangerous
preying on closed minds

the red shift
empty lies flow forth
a thundering river of
verbal deception
Owlscrying
deceptive currents
inviting, retreating ebbs
creatures without light


the red shift
from the murky depths
they arise, encroaching on
the sands' exodus
Owlscrying
metamorphosis
breathing two worlds within one
dreaming immortal

the red shift
born from our nightmares
terrorizing images
plague the creeping fog
Owlscrying
incandescently
a vortex of angel light
fearful reverance
the red shift
snarling jowls show
gleaming teeth dappled with blood
gnashing in protest
Owlscrying
grave clothes flapping
beyond grasping and control
intensifying
the red shift
howling winds are met
with unbreathable thick air
and thunderous yells
the red shift
blood trickles down from
shattered ears, deafened by the
piercing shrieks of death
Owlscrying
cold breath of the dead
rumbling in the empty night
bewitching, shrouding
the red shift
lifeless forms scattered
abroad, awaiting their turn
to roam the bleak night
xCrimsonx
lustful demonic veins
weeping sorrow amongst
dungeons catered for Queens
Owlscrying
a strange waking sleep
red dawn before the darkness
self-sealing futures


the red shift
driven mad by a
unrelenting hunger that
pulses through their core
Owlscrying
survival rate - zero
resisting forbidden fruit
indestructible
xCrimsonx
bloodied battlefields drowned
stake stricken era futiel
hell mouth fort of Kings
Owlscrying
driven from within
untold forbidden secrets
passing beyond fear
xCrimsonx
honest demonic fearing remorse
destined to become whole
growth of distance mentors aline
Owlscrying
unrelentlessly
sorceror's mad world fatal
warlocks screeching glee

the red shift
thundering hoofbeats
pound the bloody field, fire
for eyes, smoke for breath
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