When daydreams break
words and picture by
the red shift
Click to view attachment
When daydreams break
And loneliness returns
The dark monster rages on
Pricking my heart
With its poisoned needles
and lashing me with its tongue
Laced with hate and
Stained with blood
Fangs sink and tear
Holding fast to my soul
Drowning me in misery
Blinding me with despair
Consumed in darkness
I struggle to break free
My thoughts turn to you
And I slowly drift away
But I feel it creeping up again
Let the cycle ensue
Full Version: when daydreams break
wow!! very interesting.....
=) i honestly do wish i can write like you grrrrrrr *is envious*... you have me inspired and reved up to wite something soon teddybear =)
very nice Red i like. the first stanza reminds me of your Avatar =@.@= XD lol
good poetry here,.... nice cadence,.... intense mood......
QUOTE (the red shift @ Mar 2 2008, 05:49 AM) 
When daydreams break
words and picture by
the red shift
Click to view attachment
When daydreams break
And loneliness returns
The dark monster rages on
Pricking my heart
With its poisoned needles
and lashing me with its tongue
Laced with hate and
Stained with blood
Fangs sink and tear
Holding fast to my soul
Drowning me in misery
Blinding me with despair
Consumed in darkness
I struggle to break free
My thoughts turn to you
And I slowly drift away
But I feel it creeping up again
Let the cycle ensue
words and picture by
the red shift
Click to view attachment
When daydreams break
And loneliness returns
The dark monster rages on
Pricking my heart
With its poisoned needles
and lashing me with its tongue
Laced with hate and
Stained with blood
Fangs sink and tear
Holding fast to my soul
Drowning me in misery
Blinding me with despair
Consumed in darkness
I struggle to break free
My thoughts turn to you
And I slowly drift away
But I feel it creeping up again
Let the cycle ensue
This is a "lo-fi" version of our main content. To view the full version with more information, formatting and images, please click here.