Left Field
Apr 9 2008, 06:51 AM
I'm losing friends here left & right
Lost one just the other night
That's not to say that they have died
It's just they're no longer on my side
Thought that I knew everything
Find out things aren't what they seem
But I don't get angry, I just cry
It hurts so much when they pass by
Sick & tired of complaining
So many thoughts, my head is racing
Wonder what I'm s'posed to do
Guess I was wrong to want the truth
© Left Field
kissmet30
Apr 9 2008, 07:29 AM
such a sad but a good one hun... i just hope it wasn't true =(
Very simple but heartfelt, I was touched
GabrielArkAngel
May 3 2008, 05:58 AM
Another Masterpiece... So beautiful...
goalienan
May 3 2008, 12:43 PM
Aww, this is sad Left Field, but I still enjoyed reading it....
Clovis
May 3 2008, 05:17 PM
Excellent flow it just pours right off the tongue. The first stanza is the most powerful IMHO. Nice work.
Left Field
May 4 2008, 10:41 PM
Thanks you guys... I didn't even particularly like this one from myself that much.
Makes me wonder what else I may have written that others might enjoy eventhough I may not personally consider them one of my best.
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