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kissmet30
Words by Kissmet30:

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Do you see this heart?
Watch as it tears apart
See how it breaks in two
As you tell me “ I don’t love you”

Take a peak as it slowly breaks
Hear the sound it’s cracking makes
Watch as a little girls’ heart
Is slowly being torn apart

Watch my heart as it crumbles
See my tears as they stumble
Look my friend now do you see
This broken heart and the broken hearted me



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goalienan
Very nice kissmet original.gif , and I sincerely hope this wasn't about you...
kissmet30
Well it was me a long long time ago lol.. some of my poems go back since high school which would me like 15 years ago
lol... Glad you liked it though
Bella-Angelique
You are setting off all of the Mom Alerts! laugh.gif
kissmet30
LOL sorry Bella "most" if not "all" of my poems are sad but doesn't mean I am hun lol... thank you though for being so sweet
nativechick1989
Yeppers Kissmet, I'm gonna have to tell my friend to read your stuff...that dude is so broken hearted....me thinks he's looking to hard for love and ends up all broken.

Nice work, thanks for sharing them Kissmet. original.gif
kissmet30
QUOTE (nativechick1989 @ May 5 2008, 06:17 PM) *
Yeppers Kissmet, I'm gonna have to tell my friend to read your stuff...that dude is so broken hearted....me thinks he's looking to hard for love and ends up all broken.

Nice work, thanks for sharing them Kissmet. original.gif


Aww sorry to hear that about your friend.... you can have him check out my website instead original.gif I hope things better for him though, well i must say I have had my shares of heart breaks in my life lol..Thanks for appreciating.
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