QUOTE (Bella-Angelique @ May 10 2008, 04:41 PM)

He is gone forever makes it flawed.
In the absolute literal sense, yes. But the actual context of "he is gone forever" in that story is "if she doesn't do something, she'll never see him again." That story had a few flaws, though, like the idea of love at first sight, which I think people just confuse for 'the hots'.