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WEREGIRL666
So is it hard to recall the feel of it all
do you even know my voice or name?
Its a condescending word
a name to be heard
but how can you be the one to blame?
But can you hear the beating of your heart
when your alone in the dark
no i know this is not the time or place
i always had a dream
an as weird as it seems
your the star of my dreams
so how is it you can just leave with out a trace?

[chours]
[I used to believe in magic
used to believe in light
used to believe you where there all night
took my heart for granted
and it was alright]
Clovis
emo!!!!

j/k

very deep poem i can tell. from the start of if i know how it is to try and recall the feel of an event or a mood or the way things were in general. about someone else feeling their own heart when all is quiet and they can think i have thought that to about others. they have to have some feelings or thoughts in those moments. the last part is awesome especially since i was reading earlier how many religions no matter what incorporate song into their systems and ive always loved music and well to see it in a poem makes it that much stronger.
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