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STIX
Hey everyone, I haven't posted anything in here for a while, but I thought I'd share one of my recent poems.

Giant Leap

A Giant Leap for Humanity.

Examine your naked feet.
Turn them upside down,
inside out.
Feel.

Are these the delegates
Of your soul?
Of your heart?

We have walked.
Yes, this is for sure.

But what of our
potential?


By Aaron Skaley
Sporkling
Good try.
STIX
Thanks hehe, I guess.

It was a good try.

Short, simple and sweet.

I love it!! Its my personal favourite lately. What else needs to be said?


Here is one I wrote recently.

The sequence interjected-
"Retrace your steps. Transplant your dreams."
-inwards goes the spiral of transcendance.
A gentle smile, the land bore its whole truth.
In one more step, our end comes bluntly.
A mountain or an ocean or a vast dark sky,
an emptiness or a dense fog,
a leaf or a man.
The difference is thus,
within the helm of oneself.
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