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grither
I wrote this poem to show my feelings for a woman at work I think I love but cannot be with her. She has a child and a boyfriend who she will marry soon. I seem to have fallen in love with her and my poem explains how I feel.


She will never know how she makes me feel

What she does to me seems so surreal

She will never know what her smile does to me

It makes me feel so free

She will never know that she has me trapped in prison

For it seems like it's a battle that cannot be won

She will never know that she puts me on cloud nine

If only I were hers and she were mine

She will never know I am in hell

A torment from which I cannot escape for she will always compel

She will never know of how I fell

For I cannot ruin her happiness so I must succumb to her spell

She will never know of my tragic heart

For it seems despite my love we were meant to be apart








Satans_Plague
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grither
QUOTE (Satans_Plague @ Jul 18 2008, 10:35 AM) *
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Thanks bro. Just wish we could be. Oh well I'll live even if it hurts.
saturnrings
QUOTE (grither @ Jul 18 2008, 11:28 AM) *
I wrote this poem to show my feelings for a woman at work I think I love but cannot be with her. She has a child and a boyfriend who she will marry soon. I seem to have fallen in love with her and my poem explains how I feel.


She will never know how she makes me feel

What she does to me seems so surreal

She will never know what her smile does to me

It makes me feel so free

She will never know that she has me trapped in prison

For it seems like it's a battle that cannot be won

She will never know that she puts me on cloud nine

If only I were hers and she were mine

She will never know I am in hell

A torment from which I cannot escape for she will always compel

She will never know of how I fell

For I cannot ruin her happiness so I must succumb to her spell

She will never know of my tragic heart

For it seems despite my love we were meant to be apart


looking back in my youth,i used to be madly in love with the most inappropriate people. it will pass take my word for it, just ensure that your disappointments in your life will be minimal and once you meet the one, you will have cultivated your emotional self to a degree to share unconditionally.


Anukis
QUOTE (saturnriggs @ Jul 18 2008, 10:52 AM) *
looking back in my youth,i used to be madly in love with the most inappropriate people. it will pass take my word for it, just ensure that your disappointments in your life will be minimal and once you meet the one, you will have cultivated your emotional self to a degree to share unconditionally.


Beautiful words grither i feel your disappointment.

And yes saturnriggs said something worth to ponder about. I'm still in my youth and it happened to me quite often to feel feelings for someone i cannot have, i believe everyone goes through this experiences, they hurt like hell, but they eventually teach us something good at the end.
goalienan
I loved it grither, and take it from an old timer, when the right one comes along both you and she will know it.... original.gif
grither
QUOTE (saturnriggs @ Jul 18 2008, 10:52 AM) *
looking back in my youth,i used to be madly in love with the most inappropriate people. it will pass take my word for it, just ensure that your disappointments in your life will be minimal and once you meet the one, you will have cultivated your emotional self to a degree to share unconditionally.

It probably won't go away as long as I work there. Maybe when I leave.
grither
QUOTE (Anukis @ Jul 18 2008, 10:59 AM) *
Beautiful words grither i feel your disappointment.

And yes saturnriggs said something worth to ponder about. I'm still in my youth and it happened to me quite often to feel feelings for someone i cannot have, i believe everyone goes through this experiences, they hurt like hell, but they eventually teach us something good at the end.

Thanks. Hopefully it doesn't take too long to go away.
grither
QUOTE (goalienan @ Jul 18 2008, 11:20 AM) *
I loved it grither, and take it from an old timer, when the right one comes along both you and she will know it.... original.gif

Thank Goalie. I hope I find one eventually.
yvan
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