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grither
This is the 2nd poem I wrote about the woman I love. I'm sad I cannot be with her but oh well. What can you do lol. So I just thought I'd share this one too.

My love for you is strong

It plays out in my head like a sweet song

My love for you will not let me be free

For you are haunting me

My love for your beautiful self

For you are stunningly captivating both physical and inner over all else

My love for your wonderful smile

For it spreads over me completely viral

My love for you is sad

Knowing we cannot be near drives me mad

My love for you wants you to be happy

Which is why I say goodbye no matter my tragedy

Satans_Plague
Another good one bro
grither
QUOTE (Satans_Plague @ Jul 19 2008, 05:56 AM) *
Another good one bro

Thanks bro. I just wish...we could be. April...ah oh well gotta accept it.
Rosewin
Closure is good in a way but in another way it is so difficult to achieve even if we want to. Hope the hurt is easy my friend. But you should allow her to get to know the true you in small ways and see where that leads before you completely close the book. Might hurt a bit longer that way but you never know.
goalienan
I liked it my friend, but Clovis is right. Have you ever let her know what your feelings are? There are times that you can want someone or something very bad, and then when you get it you don't want it anymore... original.gif
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