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Otterclaw
I've always enjoyed visiting my grandfather on his small plot of land in Vernon, Vermont. He is over eighty years old, drives like a maniac, has no use for a wheel chair, hunts deer and other animals actively, and won't eat any vegetable unless his wife and him have grown them in his backyard. He has a voice like a bullfrog croaking or a rasping foghorn, and you have to shout equally as loud to make yourself heard. He's certainly a character, my mom often says with a sigh that I can't always distinguish the mood behind it.

For one thing, he is as stubborn as a mule and even when he knows he is wrong, he often doesn't admit it and keeps arguing. Occasionally the streak will appear in everyone in my mom's side, though I think he is currently holding the lead for the worst. He has lived in Vernon almost all of his life, and while he has his faults, it certainly is never boring around him.

I had not known much about my great grandfather until I went to visit my grandfather one day. As usual, we sat on his screened in porch while my mum chatted with my step-grandmother (so to speak) and he asked me about the normal things. School, family, friends, etc, etc. It was only when I mentioned my interest in strange and unheard of animals that he pounced upon it like a cat to a mouse. "Strange animals!" he cried. "I remember, your great grandfather, having an issue with something similar!" I was surprised, and excited. I only visited him around twice a year, and they were afternoon visits, and normally he took us out to eat and talked with my mom, only occasionally winking at me or talking. We did not normally talk about anything interesting one-on-one, I merely listened to stories he told my mother.

I begged him to share what he had to say, so he told me. Before that time, I did not know much about my great grandfather. I know from what my mum told me - he immigrated from Austria/Ukraine to America because he did not want to be fight for the German army during World War I. He had to leave his wife and children behind until later, and he greatly feared for his life. Eventually he did get to America with his wife and children, though a couple of his boys died of disease. I also knew that he often used to sleep in his barn because Russians would steal his horses. Sometimes, they would take them across the border. More often then not, he stole them back. I know that eventually he settled in Vernon, Vermont and had seven children in all.

The details of the story are sketchy, I only know from what my grandfather has told me. My grandfather is not a very poetic man, so the story is rather blunt and simple. Like I said, his voice is like a rasping bullfrog so I might have made a few mistakes. I also changed it around a bit so it is easier to read, and I did not write the original story down so I might not remember it exactly as he said it. Occasionally I asked a question on more of what it looked like in detail, and instead of writing the questions down, I have merely added them to his descrition of the creature so it is more vivid and you can get a better picture. But here it is, as close to the real thing as I can make it:

"It was on one evening late in the summer, after a number of livestock had gone missing, that he noticed his hunting dog had gone missing as well. Calling in the children from playing in the corn field, he asked if any of them had seen the dog in the past days. None of them had seen the pup since that morning, and your great grandfather decided that there must be something done. That night he slept in the barn with his gun, waiting for any sign of the mysterious creature that was making off with his livestock.
"He was awake and alert all night like a hawk, waiting in the hay silently so not to alarm the theif. For most of the night it was silent, and it wasn't until well after midnight that he saw the intruder. Unknow to him, a small gap - probably created by a mixture of clawing from an animal and rot - had taken place in the back of the barn, and a creature squeezed its way under.

"He waited silently until he could get a good glimpse of it before firing, until at once his blood went to ice. The creature's eyes glowed warily as it padded forward, and though it was almost too dark to see anything, the creature he saw was unlike any fox or bobcat he had seen. It was around the size of a coyote, though its eyes took on a strange glow. He could see a long muzzle protruding forward, and the dark shape let out a strange screeching cry unlike any coyote or dog he had heard before. It's fur took on a light, silvery glow, and just as it leaped forward and rose lightly onto its hind legs, he began to fire rapidly. It turned and a face that was round like a cat's but had a muzzle like a dog's stared at him, with two glassy eyes filled with slitted pupils. He fired again. At once it let out a piercing shriek and flew back in retreat towards the hole, only to be met with more shots. It squeezed through the hole, snagging fur and blood around the edges, before fleeing into the night.

"He was more than a little surprised on the happenings of the night. He wasn't sure if what he saw was a coyote or a demon, but he was a very down-to-earth kind of man. He never saw the creature again, though he quickly blocked the hole up and stayed in the barn a few more nights to make sure. He certainly was not seen many places without his gun. Apparently there were more reports of missing livestock from some of his friends, although they were assumed to be the cause of more natural matters. Neither the dog or the missing livestock turned up."

And thus is the end of my grandfather's tale. Believe what you like, and I am still not entirely sure. I do not think I shall ever know if he was telling the truth, if it really happened, whether or not it was exaggerated, or what sort of animal it was if it is all true. My grandfather could possibly have made it up purely for my entertainment, though he would not tell me if he was or otherwise. I suspect it could have been an exaggerated tale that my great grandfather told my grandfather, or perhaps one of them made it up completely. Still, I thought it was interesting and would share it with everyone on the UM. Does anyone have any ideas of what it could have possibly been, if the whole thing is true?

Comments are appreciated! thumbsup.gif



Fell
Well for starters, VERY interesting tale. Probably one of the best I have heard! thumbsup.gif

I think this story is real because of the other livestock disappearances. Do you know what year it happened? That would help a lot! yes.gif thumbsup.gif

If you have any more stories, I would like to hear them! original.gif
Dakotabre
I can't really comment on whether I think he was telling you the truth or not, because your the one who knows him best original.gif

If you don't mind me saying.... Your writting style was different for a post of this sort... As I was reading you post, I wasn't sure if you were showing us a part from a story you were writting or whether you were actually telling an experience... You even introduced your grandfather to the reader like a character in a novel... It was well written, You should maybe think about writting a mystery book or something thumbsup.gif
Fell
QUOTE (Dakotabre @ Sep 10 2008, 08:18 PM) *
I can't really comment on whether I think he was telling you the truth or not, because your the one who knows him best original.gif

If you don't mind me saying.... Your writting style was different for a post of this sort... As I was reading you post, I wasn't sure if you were showing us a part from a story you were writting or whether you were actually telling an experience... You even introduced your grandfather to the reader like a character in a novel... It was well written, You should maybe think about writting a mystery book or something thumbsup.gif


I agree on writing a book, you may have a gift. thumbsup.gif
Undeadskeptic
Oh Otterclaw, will you ever cease to captivate me with your incredible verge-of-madness wisdom? laugh.gif

You are amazing, really. I refuse to believe you are 11. When I was your age the best thing I wrote was a few dirty limericks; nothing compared to this masterpeice. Also it was written in a very unique and exciting way that made it very enjoyable.

So I was sort of disappointed when the actual creature was a bit of a disappointment. It just sounded like a wolf or feline, or any other four leged mammal for that matter.

I don't know what it was, but your writing is great. Keep up the fantastic work please!!! grin2.gif
Otterclaw
Hahahaha, I really don't know what to say! Thank you everyone, I now have a very warm and fuzzy feeling inside of me.

And yes, it was a true experiance that I typed up last night. I held up from telling it right away due to research about my great grandfather. Sadly, not much has come up. He did not do anything very remarkable, so he is becoming another lost figure in history. It's sad, really, supposedly he is was an incredible man. (In more ways than one!)

Thank you Undead! You should be talking about yourself! I always look forward looking through your posts. original.gif

Yes, I was a little disappointed as well. I had hoped that it would be some fantastic creature, but it sounds like a native predator who had started an interest on snacking on livestock instead of hunting.

However, my grandfather had a very interesting life filled with more stories and adventures. He fought in World War II and our town is filled with very...err, interesting folk. We are certainly a retreat out from city life. If you can get past the door without being shot in the chest or mauled to death by an angry hound dog, you can find yourself in a world of information and stories. I am going to visit my grandfather again soon, and I plan on digging around and asking him (and some of the other...lovely residents of our town) a little bit on what they know. Even if I don't find any cryptids, some of the things they can tell me are either disturbing or amazing. If anyone has any questions about the creature that you think I should ask my grandfather, I'll make sure to let him know.

What year? I'm not exactly sure, but I'll ask my Grandfather. It was probably a while after World War I ended and he got settled down, but I'll check and see if he knows. I was also looking around at the mammals in Vermont. My grandfather put lots of emphasis on a "very long snout" and "round face". I asked if it possibly could be a wolf, and he shrugged and said it was probably too small for that. If it was anything of the sort, it would be a coyote.

And Undead, you will not have to believe that I'm 11 much longer. I'll be turning twelve in a few weeks. wink2.gif

MaggieDruydess
Great tale, Wonderful writting skill and happy early birthday. You most certainly have a talent for writting. I look forward to your next post.
(And living in vermont I can attempt some research for similar stories if you like.)
Otterclaw
Why, thank you! And while it sounds like it could be a normal predator, I am not very up to date with Vermont's mammals. Do happen to know if wolves are active in Vermont? Or if they were after World War I?
Keoshin
Very interesting... It sounds very similar to any cat/dog except you mentioned it standing on it's hind legs... So Possibly a black bear? I'm not exactly familiar with Vermont's wildlife but that would explain it a few... hundred miles south.
Otterclaw
Mmph, good thought, but I doubt it. It is very hard to mistake something for a black bear. For one thing, black bears are not likely to be stealing livestock, neither would it be able to squeeze through the hole in the barn. Black bears are much, much, much, larger than a coyote. If you have ever seen one up close in the wild, you will never forget the experiance. (Although I'd much rather deal with a black than a grizzly!)
Keoshin
Good point... And yes I have seen one up close.... Bad day. Hmm... Okay Bear = No Coyote = Maybe. What about an escaped exotic pet? You know like a jaguar or cheetah even a lion. I'm pretty sure there were collectors and they might of let one go when it got to large.
Fell
I can't wait for more info Otterclaw! thumbsup.gif
Undeadskeptic
Well Otterclaw I shall be much relieved when you become 12. I shall say to my friends "Otterclaw is 12!" to which they will undoubtedly reply "Ew, you sick Paedophile!"

I guess it's a U-M thing laugh.gif
MaggieDruydess
QUOTE (Otterclaw @ Sep 11 2008, 07:59 PM) *
Why, thank you! And while it sounds like it could be a normal predator, I am not very up to date with Vermont's mammals. Do happen to know if wolves are active in Vermont? Or if they were after World War I?


I am not sure about wolves in VT after WWII but I have heard several reports in the last couple years of wold sightings. After WWII there was even less industry up here then there is now so I suppose it is possible, I will ask my great uncle he is almost 90 he would know.
Otterclaw
laugh.gif In which case I shall tell my friends, "Undeadskeptic is - ," and they shall interrupt with, "Eww! You hang out on forums with people who call themselves Undeadskeptic on a site called Unexplained Mysteries?"

And I shall contemplate that for a minute before replying, "Why, yes! In fact, I call myself Otterclaw, raise baby dragons in my signature, discuss the possible existence of fantastic creatures, and spend repeated time banging my head on the desk when I make a typo! And what have you guys been doing this weekend?"

Ah, what the U-M has done! rofl.gif


Edit: This weekend (probably Sunday) we will be heading up to visit my granddad. I'll ask him if he knows anything else about the story or other stories. I also need to finish getting the details on a strange creature reported by one of my good friends.
OzarkHowler
interesting story Otterclaw
Undeadskeptic
QUOTE (Otterclaw @ Sep 13 2008, 09:01 AM) *
laugh.gif In which case I shall tell my friends, "Undeadskeptic is - ," and they shall interrupt with, "Eww! You hang out on forums with people who call themselves Undeadskeptic on a site called Unexplained Mysteries?"

And I shall contemplate that for a minute before replying, "Why, yes! In fact, I call myself Otterclaw, raise baby dragons in my signature, discuss the possible existence of fantastic creatures, and spend repeated time banging my head on the desk when I make a typo! And what have you guys been doing this weekend?"

Ah, what the U-M has done! rofl.gif


Edit: This weekend (probably Sunday) we will be heading up to visit my granddad. I'll ask him if he knows anything else about the story or other stories. I also need to finish getting the details on a strange creature reported by one of my good friends.


laugh.gif laugh.gif laugh.gif laugh.gif laugh.gif rofl.gif

Aw man that made me crack up laugh.gif You havta ask him for any other strange tales, I eagerly await your next post.
OzarkHowler
I do as well, and lol you could both be comics (Undead and Otter)
Otterclaw
QUOTE (OzarkHowler @ Sep 12 2008, 07:13 PM) *
I do as well, and lol you could both be comics (Undead and Otter)

I would become interested if it could mean that we would become fabulously rich and be featured all over youtube. yes.gif
Fell
QUOTE (Otterclaw @ Sep 12 2008, 02:01 PM) *
laugh.gif In which case I shall tell my friends, "Undeadskeptic is - ," and they shall interrupt with, "Eww! You hang out on forums with people who call themselves Undeadskeptic on a site called Unexplained Mysteries?"

And I shall contemplate that for a minute before replying, "Why, yes! In fact, I call myself Otterclaw, raise baby dragons in my signature, discuss the possible existence of fantastic creatures, and spend repeated time banging my head on the desk when I make a typo! And what have you guys been doing this weekend?"

Ah, what the U-M has done! rofl.gif


Edit: This weekend (probably Sunday) we will be heading up to visit my granddad. I'll ask him if he knows anything else about the story or other stories. I also need to finish getting the details on a strange creature reported by one of my good friends.


Can't wait! thumbsup.gif
OzarkHowler
^ same cool.gif
Otterclaw
Sure thing! I also have another cryptid tale from my very good painter friend, but I'm not sure if I should wait until this topic dies or just post it here...
OzarkHowler
I say just go ahead an post it here, but that is just my opinion
Fell
QUOTE (Otterclaw @ Sep 12 2008, 05:57 PM) *
Sure thing! I also have another cryptid tale from my very good painter friend, but I'm not sure if I should wait until this topic dies or just post it here...


Post it as soon as possible please, can't wait! grin2.gif
Otterclaw
[Note: I will keep my friend's name anonoymous because I'm not sure how she would feel if I didn't. We will call her Sara, even though that isn't her real name.]

Visiting Sara used to be a little hobby of mine. I still do, but not as frequently as I used to. The highlight of our friendship was when I was nine years old, when Sara was around a lot more. She used to take me and her big German Shepherd, Snickers, up for walks through the woods in back of her cabin. Some people called her eccentric, but I watched her every move with awe and inspiriation. For one thing, Sara was a painter. I rarely had ever seen her in anything that did not have a splattering of paint, and her whole house (if you could call it that) was filled to the brim with portraits of people glowering down at you, or scenes of lilies drifting across ponds.

Even though she was my friend, she was not my age at all. At the time, she was in her early thirties or late twenties, though she never told me so I had to make that assuption. Her views on everything were so unique, that, it was hard to talk about anything with her without being surprised. I always used to be dropped off at her little cabin, where I would be greeted by a tail-wagging from Snickers and a cup of hot chocolate from Sara.

"I don't need much," she would reply to me as I commented on her house. It was heated by a pellet stove and was occupied bya rather large stuffed hawk sitting on a shelf high near the rafters criss-crossing across the roof. It was only a two room house (or three, counting a nearly non-existent bathroom) which was covered with her paintings. Everything about them was beautiful and disturbing, from the sculpture carved out of a very sick tree which had acquired some bulbous formations on it, to her paintings showing beautiful ladies that yet looked like they were about to cry or had some sort of shape snaking across them as if someone had wripped the canvas. Something about that reflected her personality, with her firm kindness and interesting perspective on just about everything.

I remember particularly one afternoon when I was nine. We were sitting in her living room and drinking hot chocolate and discussing politics. (While some may seem it would be strange for an adult to talk to a nine year old about politics, anyone who knew Sara would say that no nine year old in their right mind would talk to her about politics!) Soon I was discussing with her things I could not discuss with other adults - bigfoot, champ, werewolves, cryptids, etc, etc. And after a little while she told me what had happened to her a couple summers ago at her father's old summer cabin in Cooper, Maine. I remember her cabin, she invited me up one summer for a couple of weeks with my parents. When her father died she had to sell it, but I still remember days when I would sit on the dock and the stars would burn so bright I thought had been taken up in the milky way, and the velvety blackness of rippling water sent tingling up my spine. I remember being by the ocean and watching harbor seals and whales play by the schooners near campabello island, or walking up the big hill in her backyard and picking blueberries from the neighbor's. I never suspected anything strange happening there.

Once again, the story is not exactly what she said. I did not write it down, so I am simply telling it to you as I remember it. This is what she told me:

"I was feeling pretty wretched, after my father died. The whole house felt as empty and as haunted as a ghost's and nothing seemed famliar anymore. Not even the squeals of teenagers getting drunk and falling in to the water across the lake could cure my mood. I was doing more than my fair share of sulking as I finished sorting through some of my father's belongings, and it wasn't long before I had gotten lost in one of his books that I found strewn across his dismal bedroom. It was a good book, though it still did not make me any happier. I don't remember what time it was, but it was well after dark. I was sitting on the screened in porch with snickers, and trying to peer through the windows was impossible. My light bounced off them making them look like silver cobwebs, and the images of outside were muffled by the glare. It wasn't long before Snickers started barking. You know he does not like to bark - and this was a proper bark, not like when he grunts. His tail was stiff and he was racing from window to window with his claws sliding across the wood. I was a little cross so I told him to shut up, but it did not help.

"By now I was curious. I leaned against the window and turned off the light so I could see outside, wondering if someone was approaching the house or we had another moose or a fox in the yard. I saw nothing and was about to shrug off his barkings as just something, until I heard a loud crash coming from the other side of the house. At first I was startled, but then I went to investigate with Snickers at my heels. Peering out the window by the kitchen, I could make out the form of a creature near the fire pit. My heart had already leaped past my throat and was hammering on the floor. My first thought was that I was looking at a very hairy version of the Hunchback of Notre Dame. Whatever the thing was, it was huge. Twice the size of myself it looked, and it looked furry though there were no lights except for that of the moon and other houses across the lake. All I could see was the dark form looking curled up, with huge, broad shoulders (I think those were the shouders) and a small head. It had it's back to me. Snickers started to bark and howl again, and the thing stiffened and turned. I could not see anything, though I swear I saw two eyes from somewhere in the massive shape gleaming at me. Terrified, I backed up away from the window, only to hear the snapping of twigs and heavy thudding.

"I expected to see the thing crashing through the window when I looked out again, but instead I saw it veering away from the cabin and back in to the woods. Apparently Snicker's howlings had frightened it. When it ran, it looked like it was still hunched back but walking erect, on its hind legs. I could still hardly see my own hand in front of my face, but I could see the shape moving as if the ground was rolling beneath its feet. It crashed back in to the woods, but not before turning back to glare at me or Snickers, whichever one I couldn't tell. But then again, I'm only assuming it was looking at us. For all I could see, that could have been it's butt staring at us, but I'm guessing that was the face."

She stopped and I stared at her, mystified, holding on to every word. "Do you think it was a bear?" I wondered. She shook her head and smiled. "Nope! We have lots of bears around here, and let me tell you, they have they're own sort of slanting lope movement that they do when they run. This thing looked like it was on it's hindlegs."

"I wonder if it was bigfoot," I said in barely a whisper. She stared thoughtfully at the wall and murmured, "Hmph, bigfoot." a couple times before nodding. "Could've been. I don't really believe in bigfoot, but you never know, I suppose. Bigfoot...mph. I guess that will have to remain a big mysery in life, eh?" I nodded and took a sip of my hot chocolate. "You should paint a picture of bigfoot." She laughed. "I don't even know what bigfoot looks like!"

And thus, that is her story. While it's a pity that it was so dark, at least she had Snickers to alert her of the creature's presence so she could have this wonderful story to report to me, and indirectly, to you all. If you are ever hanging around Cooper, Maine, I suggest not going out at night... For the record, it was one sunny afternoon on the day before my tenth birthday, that I heard a knock on the door. Quickly sidestepping around my tail-wagging golden retriever, I found no one to be at the door. Opening it in surprise, I looked down to see a wrapped parcel sitting on the doorstep. "To Rachel," it read, "Happy double-diget! Careful of the cryptids..." I opened it up, and there, sitting on top of a book and a toy, was a very small oil painting of Bigfoot.

Edit: Spelling
Emelianenko Fungus
Good story and well written, too.

I had to check your other posts to make sure your user account wasn't some fantasy gimmick.
Fell
QUOTE (Otterclaw @ Sep 13 2008, 09:41 AM) *
[Note: I will keep my friend's name anonoymous because I'm not sure how she would feel if I didn't. We will call her Sara, even though that isn't her real name.]

Visiting Sara used to be a little hobby of mine. I still do, but not as frequently as I used to. The highlight of our friendship was when I was nine years old, when Sara was around a lot more. She used to take me and her big German Shepherd, Snickers, up for walks through the woods in back of her cabin. Some people called her eccentric, but I watched her every move with awe and inspiriation. For one thing, Sara was a painter. I rarely had ever seen her in anything that did not have a splattering of paint, and her whole house (if you could call it that) was filled to the brim with portraits of people glowering down at you, or scenes of lilies drifting across ponds.

Even though she was my friend, she was not my age at all. At the time, she was in her early thirties or late twenties, though she never told me so I had to make that assuption. Her views on everything were so unique, that, it was hard to talk about anything with her without being surprised. I always used to be dropped off at her little cabin, where I would be greeted by a tail-wagging from Snickers and a cup of hot chocolate from Sara.

"I don't need much," she would reply to me as I commented on her house. It was heated by a pellet stove and was occupied bya rather large stuffed hawk sitting on a shelf high near the rafters criss-crossing across the roof. It was only a two room house (or three, counting a nearly non-existent bathroom) which was covered with her paintings. Everything about them was beautiful and disturbing, from the sculpture carved out of a very sick tree which had acquired some bulbous formations on it, to her paintings showing beautiful ladies that yet looked like they were about to cry or had some sort of shape snaking across them as if someone had wripped the canvas. Something about that reflected her personality, with her firm kindness and interesting perspective on just about everything.

I remember particularly one afternoon when I was nine. We were sitting in her living room and drinking hot chocolate and discussing politics. (While some may seem it would be strange for an adult to talk to a nine year old about politics, anyone who knew Sara would say that no nine year old in their right mind would talk to her about politics!) Soon I was discussing with her things I could not discuss with other adults - bigfoot, champ, werewolves, cryptids, etc, etc. And after a little while she told me what had happened to her a couple summers ago at her father's old summer cabin in Cooper, Maine. I remember her cabin, she invited me up one summer for a couple of weeks with my parents. When her father died she had to sell it, but I still remember days when I would sit on the dock and the stars would burn so bright I thought had been taken up in the milky way, and the velvety blackness of rippling water sent tingling up my spine. I remember being by the ocean and watching harbor seals and whales play by the schooners near campabello island, or walking up the big hill in her backyard and picking blueberries from the neighbor's. I never suspected anything strange happening there.

Once again, the story is not exactly what she said. I did not write it down, so I am simply telling it to you as I remember it. This is what she told me:

"I was feeling pretty wretched, after my father died. The whole house felt as empty and as haunted as a ghost's and nothing seemed famliar anymore. Not even the squeals of teenagers getting drunk and falling in to the water across the lake could cure my mood. I was doing more than my fair share of sulking as I finished sorting through some of my father's belongings, and it wasn't long before I had gotten lost in one of his books that I found strewn across his dismal bedroom. It was a good book, though it still did not make me any happier. I don't remember what time it was, but it was well after dark. I was sitting on the screened in porch with snickers, and trying to peer through the windows was impossible. My light bounced off them making them look like silver cobwebs, and the images of outside were muffled by the glare. It wasn't long before Snickers started barking. You know he does not like to bark - and this was a proper bark, not like when he grunts. His tail was stiff and he was racing from window to window with his claws sliding across the wood. I was a little cross so I told him to shut up, but it did not help.

"By now I was curious. I leaned against the window and turned off the light so I could see outside, wondering if someone was approaching the house or we had another moose or a fox in the yard. I saw nothing and was about to shrug off his barkings as just something, until I heard a loud crash coming from the other side of the house. At first I was startled, but then I went to investigate with Snickers at my heels. Peering out the window by the kitchen, I could make out the form of a creature near the fire pit. My heart had already leaped past my throat and was hammering on the floor. My first thought was that I was looking at a very hairy version of the Hunchback of Notre Dame. Whatever the thing was, it was huge. Twice the size of myself it looked, and it looked furry though there were no lights except for that of the moon and other houses across the lake. All I could see was the dark form looking curled up, with huge, broad shoulders (I think those were the shouders) and a small head. It had it's back to me. Snickers started to bark and howl again, and the thing stiffened and turned. I could not see anything, though I swear I saw two eyes from somewhere in the massive shape gleaming at me. Terrified, I backed up away from the window, only to hear the snapping of twigs and heavy thudding.

"I expected to see the thing crashing through the window when I looked out again, but instead I saw it veering away from the cabin and back in to the woods. Apparently Snicker's howlings had frightened it. When it ran, it looked like it was still hunched back but walking erect, on its hind legs. I could still hardly see my own hand in front of my face, but I could see the shape moving as if the ground was rolling beneath its feet. It crashed back in to the woods, but not before turning back to glare at me or Snickers, whichever one I couldn't tell. But then again, I'm only assuming it was looking at us. For all I could see, that could have been it's butt staring at us, but I'm guessing that was the face."

She stopped and I stared at her, mystified, holding on to every word. "Do you think it was a bear?" I wondered. She shook her head and smiled. "Nope! We have lots of bears around here, and let me tell you, they have they're own sort of slanting lope movement that they do when they run. This thing looked like it was on it's hindlegs."

"I wonder if it was bigfoot," I said in barely a whisper. She stared thoughtfully at the wall and murmured, "Hmph, bigfoot." a couple times before nodding. "Could've been. I don't really believe in bigfoot, but you never know, I suppose. Bigfoot...mph. I guess that will have to remain a big mysery in life, eh?" I nodded and took a sip of my hot chocolate. "You should paint a picture of bigfoot." She laughed. "I don't even know what bigfoot looks like!"

And thus, that is her story. While it's a pity that it was so dark, at least she had Snickers to alert her of the creature's presence so she could have this wonderful story to report to me, and indirectly, to you all. If you are ever hanging around Cooper, Maine, I suggest not going out at night... For the record, it was one sunny afternoon on the day before my tenth birthday, that I heard a knock on the door. Quickly sidestepping around my tail-wagging golden retriever, I found no one to be at the door. Opening it in surprise, I looked down to see a wrapped parcel sitting on the doorstep. "To Rachel," it read, "Happy double-diget! Careful of the cryptids..." I opened it up, and there, sitting on top of a book and a toy, was a very small oil painting of Bigfoot.

Edit: Spelling


Another on-the-edge story by Otterclaw! ph34r.gif Not to mention that it was well written. thumbsup.gif

Nice ending with the oil painting. Go Snickers! grin2.gif
OzarkHowler
hey Otter, how did you retain all the info from the story with out writing it down
Drayno
QUOTE (OzarkHowler @ Sep 13 2008, 07:40 PM) *
hey Otter, how did you retain all the info from the story with out writing it down

It's something called memory.
Keoshin
Otter... Write a book, sell it, and send me the profits.
OzarkHowler
QUOTE (Masked Tragedy @ Sep 13 2008, 07:44 PM) *
It's something called memory.



oh yeah, your hilarious, but anyway, I wouldn't have remembered all the details that she typed in the story, but I believe she is telling the truth and I'm guessing she just has a really good memory
Fell
QUOTE (OzarkHowler @ Sep 13 2008, 08:34 PM) *
oh yeah, your hilarious, but anyway, I wouldn't have remembered all the details that she typed in the story, but I believe she is telling the truth and I'm guessing she just has a really good memory


She could have called her painter friend on the phone for more detailes before she wrote the story on here, just a theory though! original.gif
Otterclaw
Thanks, everyone. And as I mentioned, the story is not the exact same. I am just telling it as I remember her telling me, in my own words, since it was so long ago. When I visited her a couple weeks ago I asked for more of the details and if she could repeat some things.

So, that is how I remembered it.



Ahaha, if I do ever write a book, I'll donate half of the money to animal shelters. Or at least a quarter of it. Depends on how much money I make.
OzarkHowler
ok, I get it know, anyway like i said very interesting story, and well written original.gif, you could be a good author
Otterclaw
QUOTE (OzarkHowler @ Sep 15 2008, 05:10 PM) *
ok, I get it know, anyway like i said very interesting story, and well written original.gif, you could be a good author

Why, thank you! blush.gif
OzarkHowler
Your welcome, and also you seem to be very intelligent for your age. People say I am too, but I have met a lot of people on the internet my age and younger that are smarter.
Otterclaw
Thank you! Btw, I like your signature.
Fell
QUOTE (Otterclaw @ Sep 16 2008, 05:20 PM) *
Thank you! Btw, I like your signature.


Speaking of signatures, awesome baby dragon! yes.gif
OzarkHowler
QUOTE (Otterclaw @ Sep 16 2008, 07:20 PM) *
Thank you! Btw, I like your signature.


thanks, I am very skeptical about werewolves but I love that saying
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