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dancin'hamster
Hello!!!!!!!!!

Well, what a lovely day ~ lots of beautiful hot sunshine, birds singing.....ahh.......I love having a few days off work laugh.gif

Sorry for not being around lately - have had a squillion-and-one things to sort out and Teddy pointed out that I need to pull my socks up and get posting again - so here goes.

'It happened about a year ago and lasted for a month or so. I had just gotten a new job in the city so I needed a place to stay, anywhere to stay in fact. I had just been kicked out of my apartment so I was staying with my boyfriend, making over an hour of commute time to my new job. That really didn’t fit with me. Anyway, I found a quaint little Victorian house that was for rent. It wasn’t really a gem, a definite fixer upper, but I really needed a place to stay and the rent was cheap.
Upon that first inspection, I figured it wouldn’t get any better at the moment so I moved in immediately. The house had been built in the early 1900’s. From what little was told to me, the previous owners had run their own business there. A funeral home was the business in fact. I’m slapping myself now for moving in knowing about that. Should have run away, but being the “brave” and “strong” person I was, it didn’t matter.
When I first moved in, everything was fine. A little cold at all times, but fine all the same. I didn’t spend time there much due to my slave runner boss so nothing bothered me. Then, after five days, I heard it for the first time. The screams, those bloodcurdling screams that made my hair stand on end. And the heavy, pounding footsteps that scared me even further for they always were accompanied with the sound of something dragging. I thought it was my neighbors, a strange couple that always fought very loudly, so I dismissed it. Well, until I heard the footsteps thumping down the hall, dragging something behind them. I called the police immediately. They, of course, found nothing except an erratic me yelping about an unseen intruder.
I heard those sounds every night, at a number of different times, for little under a month until I decided that I would face the intruder. My boyfriend was visiting, so that’s when I decided. I wasn’t going to do it by myself. He didn’t have the time to visit because of something or another so that’s why he didn’t come before then.
We waited until that scream shook the house with all its wretchedness. My boyfriend was not exactly the Super Hero anymore when he heard it but he led the way to find the origins of the scream.
It was the place where most ghosts originate, the attic. Well, it wasn’t really an attic; the previous owners had made it into their little embalming room. That wasn’t very pleasant. The look on our faces when we saw all that rusty embalming equipment lying around was priceless. I remember, right before we saw it, my boyfriend said, “So, what did these people do exactly?” I was about to respond when the room got bitter cold. We could see our shallow breaths silently heaving, matching the ferocious pace of our hearts as we saw the image that is burned into my retinas every time I close my eyes. A tall, glowing, transparent man with soulless black eyes glared at us from across the room, with a (I’m guessing) bloody lump of person lying at his feet, mutilated and dismembered. A scream was frozen in my throat; my body lost all its once working functions. I wanted to leave, run far away, but my legs just wouldn’t let me. The man tilted his head slightly, still glaring maliciously.
“Do you think I don’t see you there, Maureen? Do you think that I won’t do the same thing to you that I did to her?” He motioned down to the lump with a bloody hand. That was it. My legs regained consciousness. My boyfriend and I stampeded out the door, not looking back. The footsteps followed.
“I see you! You can’t hide from me! It hurt that much, honey! You’ll be dead by then!! Maureen! MAUREEN!!!!” It called after us.
We were in my boyfriends car and gone before we ever spoke of it again. Needless to say, I moved out of that house. My mother picked up my things and I haven’t seen it again.
Later, after a little visit to the library, I found out that the previous owner, Robert Keen, had brutally murdered his wife while his daughter, Maureen, watched. She had gotten out before he could get to her. In that heat of rage, not being able to get to his daughter, the witness, he killed himself after disposing of his wife’s dismembered body. Maureen withered away in a mental institution due to the trauma of the event. And what of me? I’m still working my dead end job having countless nightmares of that night about a year ago. '

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I'm sure this provoke the 'ghosts are victims of violent death' comments.
I personally cannot believe this theory.....but it is still a very interesting case if it is genuine.
Perhaps the witness had heard about the dreadful murders previously, and subconciously remembered the story when in the house.........

*shrugs*

Who knows?

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Hammy x x x
SilverCougar
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Dear lords. That was deffinatly a fur raiser. *shivers*
Cufflink
Have I gone all cyncial, Hams, or does that story have lots of horror movie treatment moments?

The embalming equipment just happened to be in the attic. And when they went up into the spooky attic...

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A tall, glowing, transparent man with soulless black eyes glared at us from across the room, with a (I’m guessing) bloody lump of person lying at his feet, mutilated and dismembered. A scream was frozen in my throat; my body lost all its once working functions. I wanted to leave, run far away, but my legs just wouldn’t let me. The man tilted his head slightly, still glaring maliciously.
“Do you think I don’t see you there, Maureen? Do you think that I won’t do the same thing to you that I did to her?” He motioned down to the lump with a bloody hand. That was it. My legs regained consciousness. My boyfriend and I stampeded out the door, not looking back. The footsteps followed.
“I see you! You can’t hide from me! It hurt that much, honey! You’ll be dead by then!! Maureen! MAUREEN!!!!” It called after us.

I like the bit where the man tilts his head slightly. Quite a detail to remember for someone so terrified. rolleyes.gif

*skips from room, wearing one of Thistle's fetching sceptic hats*

Glad to see you back, btw, sweety. grin2.gif

Hammys Teddy
Hi Hammy, wub.gif

Sounds a bit far fetched to me...

I'd be more inclined to believe this was someones school essay than a factual account of what happened.

As Cufflink points out, the embalming equipment just happened to still be in the attic???

Wouldn't previous occupants have discovered and possibly removed it.

And if you were a funeral director, wouldnt the attic be a silly place to do embalming, i mean carrying the bodies all the way up to the attic to embalm them then have to carry them down again to be buried...???


My vote on this one is Hogwash...

Teddy. xxxx
Thistle
YAY Queen Hammy is back ! clap.gif

*does a little dance of sheer delight*

Oh, yeah the story...........well, is it possible to GET any more cliches into a few pararaphs?

Creepy Victorian House
Creepy murdering undertaker
Bloodcurdling screams
Thumping footsteps
Dragging noises
The Attic ( I'm seeing this with a long narrow winding staircase and flickering lightbulb )


great story but I don't believe a word of lol......Hmmmmm now who nicked my favourite sceptics hat?




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Wild-Eyes
Chilling story but... not likely a word of it's true. I agree, too cliche, too many details remembered. Just goes to prove all undertakers are creepy psychotic murderers, right?
Starlyte
No matter whether the stories you tell are true or not, they are wonderfully entertaining! thumbsup.gif

Starlyte
*MoG*
Seriously creepy scared.gif

Shivertastic Hammy thumbsup.gif
dancin'hamster
Aww.......thanks for the welcomes back *goes all squishey*

What do I think of the story????

Utter flim-flammery!

As Cuff, Teddy, Thistle & Wild say ~ it's way too cheesy!!!!!

The best stories I heard/read/been told are the small ones, the gentle and insideously creepy ones....not the all-out Hollywood idea of hauntings........but I posted it cos it was entertaining!

Hammy x x x

Lottie
Hey Hammy

Welcome back, your stories have been missed...thanks for another hair raising one! And just before I go to bed as well! grin2.gif

I agree with this one being too dramatised too 'Hollywood' but still very entertaining.
Agent_21
Yes, an entertaining tale, but so over the top in the way it was presented - the blood-curdling screams and the taunting ghost voice. Why would somwhere as inconvenient as an attic be used for that purpose and no, I don't think much of the 'ghosts as murder victims' theory either.
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