The day broke, it's peace shattered by the noise of the waves slamming the rocks. The ocean was angry, and furious was it's wrath, the water sweeping the man into it's depths. The mountain was quiet after the sweeping of the man into the ocean. He gatheres insight from is new surroundings, seeing the beutiful white light at the end of a deep tunnel. while walking towards it, he heard a bird sing it's sweet song. it's song piercing and echoing through and out of the darkness. The truth had hit him, he had died....


lol, yea that some story i had to write in english today, just wanted to show it


copyright Janiel 2004

Very cool Janiel

I don't think it's crappy at all...

well, i know it's not, i just dont think too highly on myself

That was pretty cool, although very short

Bob did not like his dog. It was vile and smelled of egg plant. Bob named it Meg Ryan and beat it repeatedly with a giant wet noodle. When the noodle broke after many days of beating, Bob was enlightened. He wrote a book called the wet noodle of Meg Ryan. He made millions. He never knew that the wet noodle was actually his left leg that had been sawed off while partying with Miss Piggy.
The end

thank you, ill post more story type stuffs whenever i make them

oh btw, very funny moe

i didnt quite follow it, bro

it was basically random, we had to add description to some lines

the day broke, (we then added description) get it?

the ocean was angry

the mountain was quiet

he gathers insight from his surroundings

the bird sang it's sweet song..


get it now?