QUOTE(Blue-Scorpion @ Jan 13 2005, 02:23 AM)
Could you give us a description of the city itself Kryso...
I have a sketch of the design of the Mountain the Pillars reaching for the sky... someone can use my concept design and expound upon it, if it fits the descritpion of Kryso's book.
Remember it isn't the finished artwork... just a rough sketch of "The Temple in the Sky"

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I like the design Blue S.
Below is chapter 49 of the book, here it describes the city!
49
Forward MarchDarkness started to fall over the sky. Clouds that didn’t have much light in them anyway started to lose their dull brightness.
They were on a straight-line projector, straight towards the third Gateway; nothing could stop them, apart from the failing daylight.
The Colonel motioned for one of his troopers to approach. "Get all the transportation to make a ring, get everything ready for nightfall." The Colonel then proceeded to look around the clearing they had made; he gave a small lopsided smile.
"Once all are in place send five of your best to me." He didn’t even bother to look at the man knowing he was still standing there, because he hadn’t dismissed him.
"Yes sir." No questioning or anything, just pure obedience, just the way he liked his men.
"You may depart, carry out your orders."
The trooper didn’t make a noise. Didn't motion to say he heard, but just disappeared. He knew when he turned that he would be gone. He turned slowly. The orders were already underway.
The large Earth-Destroyer was folding down its weapons, while the eighteen smaller vehicles were making a circle around it. Besides the Destroyer were the two long transportation trucks, which would hold the sleeping men; fifty at a time, while forty stood guard. The men swarmed around these machines while organising the encampment, like ants around the queen mother.
While the camp prepared for darkness the five soldiers came forward, those that were about to be debriefed about their new assignment: to bringing back the corpse of Captain Stokes.
The Colonel tuned slowly looking at the diminishing light, pulled a cigar from his breast pocket and lit it, taking a lung full of smoke and releasing it slowly, whispering, “Revenge is sweet; sweet indeed.” Then his eyes opened in a moment of internal struggle and deep underlying madness. “I’m coming for you Captain.”
Eight hundred Lanks scratched at the floor with their clawed feet, rearing to get going. They could already taste the human fleshy tissue and blood in their mouth; the sweetest of meat; man flesh.
All were in battle formation. All were in groups of fifty, each with a leader up front; each following a gaudy crudely stitched banner on a long pole. All with their different weapons of choice in their hands, spears, shields, nets and long pitch forks. All milling around jostling each other.
Their sour smell of excitement and anticipation was making the unicorns uneasy.
At the back of the group were fourteen Moregone’s. Huge bodies, front arms swinging back and forth eager also to get moving. Each had an armoured human slave attached to their back, on a small saddle between their shoulders, chained into position, to steer and control the docile beasts.
All twelve of the Circle sat upon their mounts up front. Twelve jet-black, fully grown unicorns. Heads swinging back, their manes flying around them. Also keen to get moving after being cramped up in their stables, and also from being so close proximity with all the wound up Lanks. Their armour plated hooves scraped impatiently at the ground.
The forty foot gate was almost open now, the huge wooden doors slowly lumbering across the ground.
They were to make their way out the other side of the mountain, through the great cities that bred the slaves for the mines. Across the Great Plain of Sabion towards the third and original Gateway.
The doorway now swung the last few meters into its locked position, a great reverberating sound announced its yawning maw open.
The great procession started to move out; all churning out the mountainside like a foul sea. First existed the mounted unicorn riders then the jostling Lanks, all pouring out one after another; a long line of death. Followed closely by the fourteen huge Moregone’s, the riders holding them in position, holding the magic in place to keep the Moregone’s under enchantment.
Hooves scraping the flagstones, armour rattling, clawed feet clicking, as well as weapons clanging together made a deafening hubbub of rolling noise that preceded the advancing army.
This side of the mountain wasn’t being constantly bombarded with lightning. The huge cities were built onto the side of the mountain itself, perched on its steep ridges, having colossus columns coming from the ground reaching towards the heavens, up towards the cloud line. These had a constant lightning bolts flaying off the top, rather than the lightning striking the ground, hitting the cities and destroying the Lords slaves.
Outside the cities children milled about. They were all slaves, not old enough to work in the mines, leaving them for a few more years to build up their strength.
Women milled around; all were pregnant, all were breeders for more workers, a constant breeding factory. Ten children were born almost hourly. So vast was the cities areas where the children were sent, sent to get them ready for their short brief painful lives.
At the age of nine they were forced to work. If they were strong, or just lucky they would see their tenth maybe even twelfth birthday, but very rarely.
Running through the main city the main causeway was a long straight flagstone avenue. This is where the army slowly made its way. Being watched constantly by the children and women who leant out of windows, or standing in the dark doorways holding crying babies.
The cry of women giving birth could be heard from different directions.
Monstrous fields lay around the cities, large enough to feed all the inhabitants, worked by pregnant women until they could physically work no more. These muddy fields produced green vegetables to accompany the meat: the steady quantity of meat that was wheeled out of the mountain daily, small bodies thrown into the wagons, deformed by the radiation that came through the open sky. Nothing was wasted here. The meat from their dead children would give them the strength they needed to push out the next generation of bastard slaves.
Very few men could be seen; those that were around were busy producing the next workers. Once they were too old to do that they were also sent into the mountain.
The long procession continued on, giving a small change in the otherwise dull, short lives of those watching.
Small children ran around the streets. Watching, paying attention to all that was passing. Apart from the few that didn’t move in time, mowed down by the unicorns, trampled under hoofed feet. Or those that were curious and came to close to a Lank, that quickly picked them off, supplying the excited beasts with a brief meal as they continued forward towards their goal.
The next stop, the original Gateway, to protect it at all cost.
A battle, unlike anything seen in this world before, was about to unfold.