Mentalcase
Oct 22 2004, 04:00 AM
Fire Flame
I just don't know why, you can't rely on my whole entire way..
You would always be true, if only you knew, that you are my fire flame..
I do not admire, the sound of a lier, I will retire today..
No, I must not be cold, it's just not my road, I do admire taste..
Sign's out all of the time, it flickers and shines, then I must find a way..
I put my life on a wire, this time will expire, then requires a person's haste..
Destroyers will have some employers that are so darn annoying and retort into selfish games..
I just don't know why, I can't reply, when everyone's gone away...
I will always be true, especially to you, for you are my fire flame......
William Charles Masterson Jr.
A freestyle poem I sang while walking home tonight after spending some time with my fiance.
TheOracle
Oct 22 2004, 04:49 AM
QUOTE(Mentalcase @ Oct 22 2004, 05:00 AM)
Fire Flame
I put my life on a wire, this time will expire, then requires a person's haste..
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Love that line man
Awesome MC, Great poem
Fluffybunny
Oct 22 2004, 04:56 AM
Sweet...
Maybe it is just me, but I could absolutly hear some old scratchy voiced jazz singer plinking away at his guitar in a smokey bar and singing that in a deep scratchy voice...
I guess I'm wierd...
Very good job
Mentalcase
Oct 22 2004, 05:03 AM
That's the idea basically, I was messing with different tones, low and high. Thanks for the compliment Fluffy!
Daughter of the Nine Moons
Oct 27 2004, 09:52 PM
QUOTE(Mentalcase @ Oct 22 2004, 12:00 AM)
Fire Flame
Sign's out all of the time, it flickers and shines, then I must find a way...
QUOTE(Mentalcase @ Oct 22 2004, 12:00 AM)
Fire Flame
I will always be true, especially to you, for you are my fire flame......
Very cool MC!