Tioria
Mar 30 2003, 04:40 AM
I hear a melodious tune being performed for my ears only.
The lights they show the way.
It's time to move on from this day.
I have left all that is left of me on the dew of the grass by the water's edge.
My time is done, yet once again.
EMIN3MSGURL217
Mar 30 2003, 01:14 PM
I like that only it reminds me of someone dying. I dunno, but it was beautiful.
Vox
Mar 30 2003, 01:56 PM
Don't ask me why because I really don't know what possesed me in thinking this, but when I reflect upon the poem the image of a knight comes to mind. He is alone in a darkened chapel, and he is kneeling on the floor, his hands held aloft clasping his sword whilst praying. Later that day he will fight a battle, and in his thoughts he is giving his essence to the Lord God, knowing that it is time yet again to face death in the eye, smile at it, and hopefully live to see another day.
Kismit
Mar 30 2003, 11:54 PM
It's about Dying . " I shall not step lightly into that last cold night .."
Tioria
Mar 31 2003, 03:46 AM
Interesting takes on it.
I actually wrote it a while back ago.
Believe it or not, but it does not have to do with a mortal death.
Keep Guessing!
Dr.Brain
Mar 31 2003, 05:33 AM
Its like some great musician in concert....
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I hear a melodious tune being performed for my ears only.
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Its when the musician enters the stage ....the background music plays for his welcoming.
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The lights they show the way.
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Lights on...the stage is set for a perfect melodious journey....
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It's time to move on from this day.
I have left all that is left of me on the dew of the grass by the water's edge.
My time is done, yet once again.
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He performs and goes away....
Loonboy
Mar 31 2003, 05:56 PM
Is it a night at Glastonbury?
Tioria
Apr 1 2003, 04:26 AM
Nope. I love these responses.
Tommy
Apr 1 2003, 08:53 AM
Dreaming
Kismit
Apr 1 2003, 09:02 AM
Allright I'm hooked now Tioria,
It's the day after a big night .
I don't now how many times I've woken up in the middle of a park and said this is definately gonna be the last time I ever drink .
TheOracle
Apr 1 2003, 09:02 AM
The Night leaving as the Dawn comes
Kismit
Apr 1 2003, 09:25 AM
Or The Morning mist .
Tommy
Apr 1 2003, 09:28 AM
Alien abduction?
Kismit
Apr 1 2003, 09:35 AM
Nope don't think so Tommy .
Not enough probing going on .
Tioria
Apr 2 2003, 04:47 AM
LOL!!!
Think about time and energy that u may invest in.
Ronin6th
Apr 2 2003, 09:00 AM
Is it a poem about leaving a place?
...the lights remind me of a take-off-track...
Tioria
Apr 4 2003, 02:00 AM
Kepp Guessing It will come think in turns of maybe....... a loved one?
Bloated Corpse
Apr 4 2003, 03:39 AM
Waking up next to and going to sleep next to the person you love and care deeply for.
Tioria
Apr 6 2003, 03:45 AM
I wish it was that simple but no Alot more complex.
Let me know when u guys are tired of guessing.
Ronin6th
Apr 8 2003, 10:46 AM
Tioria...I want to know!
Loco
Apr 8 2003, 11:06 AM
Is it about moving on from a relationship, maybe knowing that the end of it is near and you will be moving on
breaking up????
Althalus
Apr 8 2003, 11:21 AM
All that I can think of is a wedding, but other than that I have no idea yet.
Tioria
Apr 8 2003, 04:26 PM
Ok ok ok.
Its about best friends who have known each other for 10 years.
One of them ALWAYS bailing out the other one and never getting any help in return.
One of them always being there for the other one, and never having them be there for them.
Its a guy and a girl and its the girl who basically has to reach into herself and basically let go of the friendship which is a very hard thing to do.
Sad huh....
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