Dangerous lies and torment be
Oh sweet word please set me free
Dost haunting nights and reckless hell
Do place my soul to sell
Winter nights and scorn hate
Touch me with your hand of fate

i came up with this in 10 seconds, how does everyone like it.?

*bump* no replies eh?

it takes time for people to notice art work malakiem .. you'll just have to be patient some times

I like your poem .. its really weird .. I do have the same feelings some times
Have you posted more some where on the forum? if you have .. I think I read them .. they are pretty good .. keep em coming

Thank you for the kind words:), um no i have no more poems up. I use to have a whole bunch of them on my hard drive, but i accidently deleted them all. I'll try to remember some of them. I'll post some of my stories i'm doing, i have 30 in all so far. I have to cetch them all:D sorry for the lame pun....

its always better to write them down before you type them on the PC .. or you could simply print them out after you have written them .. just incase you dont lose them by deleting them accedently