You better watch out,

You better not cry,

Better not pout,

I'm telling you why:

Big Brother is coming for you.

He's making a list,

And checking it twice;

Gonna find out

Who's naughty and nice.

Big Brother is coming for you.

He sees you when you're sleeping.

He knows when you're awake

He knows if you've been bad or good,

So be good for own sake!

Oh, you better watch out!

You better not cry.

Better not pout,

I'm telling you why:

Big Brother is coming for you

Big Brother is coming for you!

~Thanato

hahaha , thats great

nice poem! but i despise that show...

I believe that if you cant say anything good, say nothing at all so I will shut up now

i agree with crazy boy except i'm going to say that you just took out "santa" and inserted "big brother" and instead of "to town" you put "for you"....

It does sound just a tad familiar.............

i thought they were coming to town, so i could audition for a chance at self-exploitation.

haha, oh you uneducated ninnies who think Big Brother is nothing but a TV show.

lol...........no one has heard of 1984?


The whole concept of Big Brother scares me. The goverment controlls enoguh as it is.


Show is ok.

The song is toOoOo familiar....

is that the only changes you've made? I'd be more impressed if there was more..

sorry but im with Jesus Freak and Hailo its not different enough. . .

everytime you write a poem, baby jesus cries and an angel loses its wings.

I originaly put this in the Conspericy thing, lol.

I thought that Santa is Comming to town sounds to like Big Brother lol

ITS NOT THE GOD DAMN TV SHOW!!!!!

~Thanato

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I started to read the book, but it was too...something. I dunno. Im more into magic and fantasy. I just assumed people would think of the show. I know how stereotypical people can be sometimes.