Something I whipped up:)

One


Souls lost in this world we hate
Tortured hearts walk the streets we call life
Never seeing the the end of this long night

Forever standing in the line that leads to nowhere
Looking up at the sky with tears in their eyes
Knowing their fate is set in stone
Death, is knocking on their window

We take for granted the life we lead
Never giving a thought about how we hate
or the hearts we break

Lost souls wandering around with no purpose
or feeling of wanting.
Some wake from this never ending slumber
most suffer like all the others

Rising from the lowest of low
knowing there is more to have
letting the light touch your soul
A smiling child, a soft hand
feeling the warmth come back
the feeling returning from the black of night
and awakening finding just a touch of light

That was wonderful Welcome to the forum ConspiracyChic

WOW....That has allot of meaning to it....

Where are my manners, welcome, and enjoy the forum..

Firstly - hello and welcome...

Second - wow, a very deep meaningful poem; I like it a lot, it encapsulate all our thoughts, worries and deepest fears!

Couldn't of put that better my self Kryso..

You know, with a small bit of tweaking, that would go nicely to a backing track of the Metallica song called One!!

*shuts up and tells himself to STOP thinking about rock music*

thanks everyone.


Glad everyone liked it

We certainly did