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Wooddevil
Entitled "Guardians", it is a work of horror fiction taking place in a small New Hampshire town. It involves purportedly true tales of the areas Native American tribes which tell of hair-clad hominids that roam the woodlands. The plot of the story works off the actual ccurrence of a mystery illness that had spread amongst the Abenaki people soon after initial contact with European fisherman visiting the Maine coastline.

It is a highly entertaining read. if I must say so myself
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GUARDIANS SYNOPSIS
BY DEREK RUSH

Sometime between the years 1564 and 1570 an unknown illness was spreading throughout the Northeast, infecting scores of the Native people there. Immunities to what the white man brought with them were weak. As a result thousands perished in its wake, leaving survivors to contend with the scores of dead, and an aftermath which gave rise to an ominous legend.
The Abenaki tell of the Cheenoo, the Micmac know the Gugwes, the Strendu were said to be the averred enemy of the Huron and Wyandot—all relate dreaded accounts of those able to rend the earth in fury, of cannibal giants, guardians of the land who roam mostly at night. And for years, it remained just that…a legend…spoken of today with tongue-in-cheek and a good roll of the eyes.
Now, a recent rash of bizarre animal mutilations have those of a small New Hampshire community on edge. While authorities are warning all residents to be on their guard for what is believe to be a rogue black bear, and urge that family pets be kept indoors at night, some of the older-timers haven’t yet forgotten the sightings of the late 1930’s, nor for that matter, of the frantic search for the two little girls who went missing without a trace more than six decades ago. They know better than to scoff at the local Indian lore, because that which is taken lightly here in the North Country has a way of biting back.
Sixteen year old Max Lambert, on the other hand, has never put much thought into monsters, at least not beyond those of the horror novels he often finds himself engrossed in. In fact, he’s never seen Ellisburg for anything other than the quiet northern New Hampshire town it is. Which is precisely why he and his mother love it so much.
He and his mother, Emily, have traveled from Massachusetts to New Hampshire so often that both can almost give an accurate count of the dotted lines on the highway between their house and granddad’s, a place each have come to know as their second home. But with the unexpected passing of the old man, Max begins to worry that talking his mother into moving there permanently might not have been the best of ideas. Aside from already missing his two closets friends, and recognizing that he’s got an entire summer to dwell upon the arduous transition to a new school in the fall, he fears that maybe the house will have changed somehow with granddad gone. After all, he’s what made the place so special to begin with. It’s been difficult coping with his death. Losing him was like losing the father figure he’s never had, never knew. Being just him and his mother all these years, battling together against life’s never ending supply of adversity tossed their way, he has to figure the change will do them good. Even she agrees the smaller house is more suited to them—no more traffic jams and busy supermarket lines, no more nosey neighbors and booming car stereos…just a whole bunch of that wonderful peace and quiet she’d always enjoyed growing up there as a kid. Although she looks forward to coming home, to once again being able to concentrate on her writing, and maybe even getting that lens off her new camera to snap a few shots of the wildlife, she worries for the same things her son does—the memories—and if it’ll all be the same, or just another big mistake. However, after being paid a visit from an old friend, she comes to see her decision as anything but.
Max, too, finds good reason to suck it up and settle in. He’s been looking forward to finally getting the chance to break in his new ATV, setting out later on to charter the wealth of area footpaths and fire roads, and simply jumping headlong into some serious riding—something he was desperately lacking back home. He’s drawn to the forest. Always has been. When he heads out the following morning for a jog, he’s almost glad to be nearly run down by the local gang of dirt bikers, for after the cloud of dust clears, he meets a new pal, and soon learns of THE place to really “tear it up” and “break it in”.
The Pits, an old sand and gravel pit, is an off-roader’s dream come true, a rolling play of land so deep in the engulfing woods and far from town that the local gang of dirtbiking hooligans have absolute reign over what they’ve transformed into the most spectacular race track he’s ever seen, complete with enough jumps and dips and whoops and hairpins that’ll make even the most professional Motocross riders envious. It just leaves Max drooling. But his amazement is short-lived and quickly takes a backseat to the bad vibes that hold high court here. He feels watched.
Tales of the area and an ominous history lesson told by the old school teacher he soon meets, lead him to believe that his concerns for some strange happenings of late are not unfounded, that maybe there was something more to an incident with a strange man earlier this morning who made even his brave companion, Cody—his granddad’s yellow Labrador—shy away and whimper. Ghosts and hair-clad monsters only add to his curiosity.
Max doesn't think much of the new development site or for callous land developer with plans for a golf course and a grudge for the local kids. He just wants to know more of Brittany Lawrence, the pretty girl next door who just about made him forget the spoken word when he tried striking it up with her down at the market yesterday, and the bonfire party there tonight might be his best chance at doing just that.
He's not expecting the things of his nightmares to be waiting for him there.
In the long night ahead, Max Lambert will be forced to confront the horrors no one else dares to believe in. Soon he will come to learn the fate of a man he never had the chance to know.
Wooddevil
Thanks for all your replies...

It's much appreciated whistling2.gif
The Raven
QUOTE(Wooddevil @ Mar 9 2005, 07:18 AM)
Thanks for all your replies...

It's much appreciated whistling2.gif
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Don't feel bad, it seems as people don't care about books much anymore in the writers and artist hangout, but I still do, and I did read your synopsis.

What did I think of it? Long, descriptive, enticing, and did I mention EXCELLENT! You're synopsis was so engulfing, I actually wanted to read the book by the second paragraph. I can relate to a lot of the things in the story since infact I did live in Maine, and have been to New Hampshire quite a few times, and I can also relate to having no one reply to book threads. Hopefully someone will care when I post Chapter 2 later on.

Could you put some information about where and when this book will be available to purchase, because I REALLY want to read it. thumbsup.gif
Maekrix
I must say, that sounds extremely interesting. However, I don't know how that'll all fit on the back of the book (thats a joke right there wink2.gif )

Anyway, like Raven said, very descriptive. I'm not much of a horror person, but it sounds enthralling. I like the fact that your story has SOMETHING behind it, a myth, or legend, whereas most 'horrors' in this day are blood-fests, especially the stuff in those horrid movies.

I live in Maine, so the fact this story is so close to home in NE, I probably would find it more interesting. I really would love to read this.

I agree with Raven, is there a place/way I could purchase this when its published?
Wooddevil
Thanks guys.

I'm just about to send it out to a publisher. Keeping my fingers crossed hmm.gif

So if things get rolling, I'll post an update.

Wish me luck wink2.gif
Scorpius
That was a well-written synopsis. The reading ease is perfect, I didn't find myself going over it twice, just to understand what was actually being said.

Is this the first book you've written?
Wooddevil
Yes Blue Scorpion, very first. I just sat down one morning at the computer and started typing. I had an idea and just went with it. The plot evolved over time; starting out with a rough guideline on what was to happen, new stuff just kept popping in to help me out in the end.

I was initially a much larger book. When I learned that publishers need things double-spaced it simply turned out too large for my liking. But on the plus side, the stuff I scrapped gave me the start of another book entirely grin2.gif
Scorpius
Good process. For me, the best inspiration comes when you least expect it. yes.gif

So does that mean you have another book on the way after this one? Any hints on what the next one will be about? grin2.gif
Kryso
Very impressive… You have a gift when it comes to opening up a world inside people’s heads, so they can envision your words.

Only one problem, this would have to be the books prolog, because it’s much to long to be the books synopsis, which are normally only 150-200 words at most!

I look forward to reading your next installment.

Wooddevil
Thanks Kryso. And the "Prologue" is another animal entirely (at least for my book) grin2.gif But this, even though a bit long, sums up the book for the publisher as quickly as I could manage, and keeping it interesting (and hopefully enticing enough to make the editors want to delve deeper into the book itself).

I took your earlier advice and sent the finished manuscript (In MS Word form) to Publish America. They just emailed me back wanting an author's bio, so I just sent it off.

How long did it take you to get things rolling with them?
Wooddevil
QUOTE(Blue-Scorpion @ Mar 9 2005, 08:33 PM)
So does that mean you have another book on the way after this one?  Any hints on what the next one will be about?  grin2.gif
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Sure do--in fact, I just started one yesterday. Thinking of calling it "A Midnight Crossing."

The plot is still in the early stages as I start off, but a long-haul trucker is the main character. He encounters a mysterious girl who wakes him from his sleep shortly after he calls it quits for the day, parking his rig in a cut-off on a dark, lonely road in upstate NY.

It will involves roving spirits and that weird realm between their world and ours.

I'm going to try and make it shorter than "Guardians". We'll see how it pans out.
Kryso
QUOTE(Wooddevil @ Mar 10 2005, 09:49 AM)
Thanks Kryso.  And the "Prologue" is another animal entirely (at least for my book) grin2.gif  But this, even though a bit long, sums up the book for the publisher as quickly as I could manage, and keeping it interesting (and hopefully enticing  enough to make the editors want to delve deeper into the book itself).

I took your earlier advice and sent the finished manuscript (In MS Word form) to Publish America.  They just emailed me back wanting an author's bio, so I just sent it off.

How long did it take you to get things rolling with them?
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It takes a very long time... From signing the contract to publication takes from 9 months to a year! And if they agree to publish you will have to make a synopsis of up to 150 words, no more!
Wooddevil
Oh, what's that for, the back of the book? Something short yet nifty enough to catch a possible book buyer's eye?
Kryso
QUOTE(Wooddevil @ Mar 10 2005, 11:18 AM)
Oh, what's that for, the back of the book?  Something short yet nifty enough to catch a possible book buyer's eye?
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Short and sweet
Silent-Storm
QUOTE(Wooddevil @ Mar 9 2005, 03:53 PM)
Thanks guys.

I'm just about to send it out to a publisher.  Keeping my fingers crossed hmm.gif

So if things get rolling, I'll post an update.

Wish me luck wink2.gif
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Good luck thumbsup.gif

It is a realy good read..
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