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Maelstrom5
QUOTE(UniversalParadox @ May 22 2006, 12:39 AM) [snapback]1199874[/snapback]

What a wasted line
Wonder if Caligrophers
Have any white-out unsure.gif



Have any white-out?
Lots I could do with that...
To err is divine
artymoon
To err is divine
And mistakes we can learn from
Anonymous thoughts
FrankBlunt
Anonymous thoughts
Feelings unmentionable
Forgotten actions
Kaknelson
Forgotten actions.
As time goes by, we forget.
Thoughts simply slipping.
=Jak=
Thoughts simply slipping.
A big drum makes more noise..
three line haiku is best!
Kaknelson
Three line haikiu's best!
We Have fun like trees have leaves,
Like green tea has steam.
Mr. Fahrenheit
Like green tea has steam,
Unholy Haiku Has Rules!
5-7-5 Jack.
Kaknelson
5-7-5 Jack.
I done told him many times!
One can only try. hmm.gif

nativechick1989
One can only try.
don't preach, someone might rebel
mind your own business.
FrankBlunt
Mind your own business
Respect everyone's leisure
Don't wear leisure suits
Mr. Fahrenheit
Don't wear leisure suits.
They make a funny whoosh sound
And they also chafe blush.gif
Maelstrom5
QUOTE(UniversalParadox @ May 22 2006, 11:00 PM) [snapback]1201205[/snapback]

Don't wear leisure suits.
They make a funny whoosh sound
They also chafe blush.gif


They also chafe
They're itchy and scratchy too
Give me silk instead
Maelstrom5
QUOTE(UniversalParadox @ May 23 2006, 04:01 AM) [snapback]1201601[/snapback]

They also chafe blush.gif
(does the smily guy count as your 5th syllable? tongue.gif )
FrankBlunt
Give me silk instead
Comfort, courtesy of worms
Gourmet meal for moths
nativechick1989
laugh.gif .. UniversalParadox
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Give me silk instead
it's so smooth and comforting
must not let it snag
Kaknelson
Must not let it snag,
sag, or pull off the tag.
Wear silk in the jag.
Abecrombie
wear silk in the jag
not rough tweedy wool pants ok ?
who said you could drive?
Kaknelson
who said you could drive?
my mother of course, who else?
were going crazy!

Edit: get it... where we going? were going . crazy. grin2.gif
nativechick1989
were going crazy!
spinning around in circles
I lost direction
Mr. Fahrenheit
I lost direction
Somewhere back in Wyoming
Broad boarders, wide sky.
nativechick1989
Broad boarders, wide sky.
surfing on a puffy cloud
it's so fun to dream
Mr. Fahrenheit
its so fun to dream
A moment in fantasy
Make up a new world
nativechick1989
Make up a new world
where it is far far away
none to bother me
Mr. Fahrenheit
None to bother me
Waiting to get virus off
Who makes viruses?
nativechick1989
Who makes viruses?
all those teeny tiny things
can be very bad
Mr. Fahrenheit
can be very bad
Devil Girl with leather boots
Gum on the bottoms
Kaknelson
Gum on the bottoms.
Saying "Only time will tell, if...
We all go to Hell."
=Jak=
We all go to Hell."
At least we stay here without ill;
Yes health is wealth!
Maelstrom5
QUOTE(j4jak @ May 24 2006, 02:11 AM) [snapback]1202875[/snapback]

We all go to Hell."
atleast we stay here without ill;
Yes health is wealth!


Yes health is wealth
At least we are alive, my friend
So fleeting, is time

Kaknelson
So fleeting, is time
She spoke so soflty about:
"Great Gig in the Sky".
Kaknelson
"Great Gig in the Sky".
Holding us down, from the truth,
An all watching eye.
=Jak=
An all watching eye.
The one given a word of freewill;
That lacks the meaning!
mandricius
That lacks the meaning!
On everything youre talking,
Put some sense...

grin2.gif
Kaknelson
QUOTE(mandricius @ May 23 2006, 09:31 PM) [snapback]1203036[/snapback]

That lacks the meaning!
On everything youre talking,
Put some sense...

grin2.gif


Put some sense in it?
You married to Marry Jane? laugh.gif
Cannabis Culture.
FrankBlunt
Cannabis Culture
Tension-free highway mishaps
Drinking and smoking
Mr. Fahrenheit
Drinking and smoking
You trace the veins back in time
To a better place
nativechick1989
To a better place
as long as it's anywhere
just take me away
Kaknelson
Just take me away!
Lift us all up like feathers,
let us set a drift.
Mr. Fahrenheit
Let us set a drift
Go someplace far and away
Carried by the wind
FrankBlunt
Carried by the wind
Seeds and parachute spiders
Please give me the seeds
=Jak=
Please give me the seeds
Let me find seed or tree first;
creation part of imagine!
Kaknelson
Imagination.
This wind cannot drop us now,
we are flying high.
Maelstrom5
QUOTE(j4jak @ May 25 2006, 01:34 AM) [snapback]1204268[/snapback]

Please give me the seeds
Let me find seed or tree first;
creation part of imagine!


(Last line has 8 syllables, but I'll go with it, but breaking it into two lines)

Creation part of
Imagine, John Lennon said
Problem was, I did...


nativechick1989
Problem was, I did...
I should have never done that
can not take it back
Kaknelson
Can not take it back.
But now we are given it,
so we must unite!
=Jak=
so we must unite!
You know four oxen and the Lion;
Never give a chance!
nativechick1989
Never give a chance!
there are no second chances
mistakes are not good
=Jak=
mistakes are not good
but this experience make you wise;
still we miss sense!
Kaknelson
QUOTE(j4jak @ May 24 2006, 10:53 PM) [snapback]1204497[/snapback]

mistakes are not good
but this experience make you wise;
still we miss sense!

PLZ EDIT YOUR POST: 5 - 7 - 5

mistakes are not good - 5
but this experience make you wise; - 9
still we miss sense! - 4

thanks, so we can go on with this ... original.gif
Abecrombie
tis five seven five
slyables are the key here
try clapping your hands
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